Good feedback so far on my 1st submission...

[LaJovena]

Please read my first submission

I've received good comments so far. It is not a "wham bam thank you ma'am" kind of story, so don't bother if that's all you're interested in. It's a piece of historical fiction, a story told from the POV of a young bride. Hope you like it.

Please go check out "The Choice" by LaJovena at http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=210922

 

[aabelard]

It's a splendid first effort, especially if you are really young. So few of the stories we of pure sexual athleticism we find around here, are actually optimistic about people's lives. But yours is.

What I think we all realise, is that there isn't much of a publisher's market for anything in the middle ground between fiction with a dash of eroticism, and the kind of book one might permit one's servants to read. (Yes, that was the standard suggested in court in the Lady Chatterley obscenity trial, during my lifetime!) But if you find your niche and keep practicing, you could be out there in print someday.