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Hello! I'm looking for a BDSM story recommendation in hopes of getting past a problem scene that I'm currently having in a BDSM story that I'm trying to write.
My story was going along fine, but then I got to a scene involving clips. I mean a lot of clips and clamps put on various parts of the body, not just the nipples. For some reason the scene isn't coming to life--and I don't know why. The answer is probably right there in front of me, but I can't see it. So, I thought that maybe, if I read a story that got it right, I'll finally catch sight of what's missing---of what my scene needs to work. (I hope that makes sense!)
Can anyone recommend a good story here on Lit that you feel offers a sizzling but realistic scene involving such?
(I did try doing a search, by the way, but I ended up wading through all these stories that only qualified because they had a brief mention of nipple clips/clamps
Not much help.)
Thank you so much for any ideas!
My story was going along fine, but then I got to a scene involving clips. I mean a lot of clips and clamps put on various parts of the body, not just the nipples. For some reason the scene isn't coming to life--and I don't know why. The answer is probably right there in front of me, but I can't see it. So, I thought that maybe, if I read a story that got it right, I'll finally catch sight of what's missing---of what my scene needs to work. (I hope that makes sense!)
Can anyone recommend a good story here on Lit that you feel offers a sizzling but realistic scene involving such?
(I did try doing a search, by the way, but I ended up wading through all these stories that only qualified because they had a brief mention of nipple clips/clamps
Not much help.)Thank you so much for any ideas!
