Goldilocks....Adult Version...

SEVERUSMAX

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....3 Bears....being Papa Bear and his two sons Big Brother Bear and Little Brother Bear....not actual Bears, but Bears as in hairy guys....one's cock is too large, one is too small, and of course, one's cock is just right....wonder which is which? Naturally, this is more of a gang-bang, fling deal than a long-term arrangement, or is it? Perhaps it should depend on the respective libidoes of the "Bears"....how high or how low (or just right in one case? lol)...or how jealous or sharing everyone is....be interesting to consider different possible paths for this one....maybe more than one writer with a different version....well, that is the point of this board....ideas up for anyone's use... :devil:
 
lol Where do you get your ideas? :) This is cute! It could fit the classic fairytale of the female wandering into someone's home in the woods. They're not at home and come back and find her.

I think they should be unattractive "hill folk" big, hairy "bear men". Big cock goes first. It hurts, she's putting up a fight, etc. Small cock goes next, she wants to laugh... Finally, the third guy goes and she's in heaven even if he (they) is (are) ugly. ;)
 
In Alaska maybe?
Edit - For some reason when I read it, I immediately thought of Anna Heche and that show she has/had. What's it called, Men in Trees?
 
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Hallowed Eve said:
lol Where do you get your ideas? :) This is cute! It could fit the classic fairytale of the female wandering into someone's home in the woods. They're not at home and come back and find her.

I think they should be unattractive "hill folk" big, hairy "bear men". Big cock goes first. It hurts, she's putting up a fight, etc. Small cock goes next, she wants to laugh... Finally, the third guy goes and she's in heaven even if he (they) is (are) ugly. ;)

LOL....thanks....and I get them from my own perverse imagination... ;)

They might even figure out a system....small dick goes in asshole (so it can do its best), big cock in mouth (so she can take care of any oral fetish), and average, "just right" cock in pussy....give her a libido high enough to take care of all three of them and put them in rural Alaska as Mona suggests...and it could make an interesting polyandrous arrangement (not my usual cup of tea, but here it has a nice, nasty fascination).....maybe even toss in some bisexual fun (hey, 3 guys without a girl for that long until she comes along....kind of like a prison situation).....after all, the trolls will blast it for being "gay", anyway....Goldie might get a kick out of sharing her guys with each other.... :devil:
 
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SEVERUSMAX said:
LOL....thanks....and I get them from my own perverse imagination... ;)

They might even figure out a system....small dick goes in asshole (so it can do its best), big cock in mouth (so she can take care of any oral fetish), and average, "just right" cock in pussy....

I thought about this right after I posted the edit, but wasn't sure how it would work.
Sounds satisfying though either way.
 
Reminds me of the old joke about Little Red Riding Hood. When the wolf wants to fuck her instead of devouring her, she says, "Oh no you don't; you're going to EAT ME, just like it says in the book!"
 
I love fairy tales, and I love adult twists on fairy tales as well (especially given that many were actually intended to be sexual morality lessons).

I, personally, would like to see the consequences of what happens to young Goldilocks when she wanders into someone else's home. The three bears may be none too happy about the spoiled way in which she helps herself to their things.

"Doesn't that feel just right inside your cunt, goldilocks?"

"What? It's too big? Here, try mine."

;)
 
bisexplicit said:
I love fairy tales, and I love adult twists on fairy tales as well (especially given that many were actually intended to be sexual morality lessons).

I, personally, would like to see the consequences of what happens to young Goldilocks when she wanders into someone else's home. The three bears may be none too happy about the spoiled way in which she helps herself to their things.

"Doesn't that feel just right inside your cunt, goldilocks?"

"What? It's too big? Here, try mine."

;)

Yeah, hilarious, right? She really does have an attitude problem, doesn't she?
 
Another possible twist is Goldilocks and the Three Bares, when she stumbles into a remote cabin where three ardent nudists live ... thus avoiding the Lit opposition to bestiality.

Edited to add Better not put it in Alaska though.
 
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Why not have a little blonde haired nympho named Goldie Locke get it on with the three Behr brothers? The brothers could make a bet about whomever has the best tasting cum. Goldie is the judge and participant. The winner gets to screw her, and in a recognition of the original Grimm tale (where she is eaten in the end), the losers have to clean up the cream pie.
 
Before putting pen to paper, this same idea has been taken in a porn film called "Goldy Cocks".
You would be guilty of plagiarism.
 
How would it be plagiarism if SEVERUSMAX, or anyone else, does not write a story called "Goldy Cocks"?



Also, never once did SEV suggest bestiality in any of his posts. :rolleyes:
 
All those hairy guys? They'd be rough too? Put me in line for some of that when you're finished! It'll be a great read!
 
Hallowed Eve said:
How would it be plagiarism if SEVERUSMAX, or anyone else, does not write a story called "Goldy Cocks"?



Also, never once did SEV suggest bestiality in any of his posts. :rolleyes:

Thanks. Attagirl. :cool: :rose:
 
rydia57 said:
All those hairy guys? They'd be rough too? Put me in line for some of that when you're finished! It'll be a great read!

Yeah, it seems to hold some appeal for some gals.....good news for me, given how hairy I am. :cool: ;) :eek:
 
rydia57 said:
All those hairy guys? They'd be rough too? Put me in line for some of that when you're finished! It'll be a great read!

and angry i bet. What would they do to punish her besides filling all of her holes?
 
Fantasies_only said:
Before putting pen to paper, this same idea has been taken in a porn film called "Goldy Cocks".
You would be guilty of plagiarism.
Er ... no. The version suggested here is heterosexual, whereas "Goldy Cocks" is actually 100% gay.
 
lol the ideas on here never cease to amaze me! Maybe Lit needs a new category for sexual fairy tales! Aside from the Goldilocks and Little Red Riding Hood, what other fairy tales could be twisted into a Lit story?

Beauty and the Beast - A guy with low self-esteem ends up with the sexy female protagonist against all odds

Snow White and the Seven Studs - Snow White is the perfect name for a sexy heroine lol! And each of the seven studs could have a particular fetish. Oh and one of them has to be called Sleazy! lol!

Cinderella - Good for a shoe fetish story.

Any others?
 
I've got the perfect title:
"Snow White Meets The Black Stallion".
By the way, according to the real fairy tail, Snow White is a virgin.
Maybe that can be used here.
 
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