Gift of the Magi meets Indecent Proposal

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a young couple are about to get engaged. except he knows that she expects/needs/desires a truly magnificent ring which she pointed out to him at the jewellers. He knows there is no way he can afford it. In desperation, he goes to the store. The owner proposes that in return for the ring, the man deliver on a weekend tryst between his girl and the jewller. Does he do it? Does she agree? what happens?

again, this idea I offer freely to anyone who wants to write it, as I have too many in progress already. Not that I'm making much progress.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

I don't know, but this doesn't really work for me.

I mean ... the guy has to tell his wife: If you have this weekend tryst, I can give you this ring .... So, I guess the woman would say: I don't need a ring like that, when I have to do a weekend tryst with the jeweller.

Also: Let's say the girl would agree. She goes on the weekend tryst and the jeweller gives her the ring. But in that case, the guy wouldn't be involved at all.

Maybe, there could be another wife. Like: The jeweller wants a date with the sister of the guy ... so this guy has to talk his sister into dating the jeweller

 

[deliciously_naughty]

a young couple are about to get engaged. except he knows that she expects/needs/desires a truly magnificent ring which she pointed out to him at the jewellers. He knows there is no way he can afford it. In desperation, he goes to the store. The owner proposes that in return for the ring, the man deliver on a weekend tryst between his girl and the jewller. Does he do it? Does she agree? what happens?

again, this idea I offer freely to anyone who wants to write it, as I have too many in progress already. Not that I'm making much progress.

To make this work you'd have to have the girl be very materialistic. Having a relatively strong materialistic streak myself, I could say that a nice 2 or so carat diamond of the highest quality in a gorgeous platinum band worth over 50k might be tempting enough for me to have sex with the jewler, assuming that he is handsome.

On the other hand if she refuses, do they continue the relationship? Not all stories have to end happily.

 

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On the other hand if she refuses, do they continue the relationship? Not all stories have to end happily.

exactly. Another variation is that she agrees, but the "happy ending" isn't marriage to her guy, but to the jewelller. Happy for material girl, happy for jeweller, ultimately happy for guy, who would never keep her anyway.

As to believability, perhaps she is competitrive, and will only mrry if the ring is bigger than her kid sister's " Bad enough that lil bitch got engaged first, but I'll be damned if she has a bigger ring."

So she goes along, but decides a) guy can't love her enough if he agrees or b) if guy is too poor to provide, she better love the rich one.


More thoughts welcome!

 

[NASCARaddicted]

what about this:

the wife is a materialistic bitch. So she agrees to go on a (sex)date with the jeweller.

However .... the jeweller is also married. His wife is not so materialistic ... she is more interested in sex. But the jeweller has a small dick. The other guy has a nice big dick.

So maybe this 2 guys just swap their wifes ...

 

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what about this:

the wife is a materialistic bitch. So she agrees to go on a (sex)date with the jeweller.

However .... the jeweller is also married. His wife is not so materialistic ... she is more interested in sex. But the jeweller has a small dick. The other guy has a nice big dick.

So maybe this 2 guys just swap their wifes ...

I laughed so hard I fell off the chair- talk about " happily ever after"!

 

[Guest]

I have different suggestion: The jeweller is very old and he only want's to watch the sex between the married couple at their first night. The guy agrees without telling his future wife...But he doesn't know that the jeweler hire 2 rapist which also take their turn with the bride...

 

[NASCARaddicted]

maybe not rapists.

he could secretly videotape the couple and then he could blackmail them.

Or, he tells his 2 friends if they want to watch a couple during sex. He doesn't know that they are rapists.

Or maybe, they aren't rapists at all. This 2 guys just notice that the woman is not really happy, the sex with this guy is not so good. So suddenly, they walk in the room (with their pants down) and offer her some real big dicks ...

 

[deliciously_naughty]

actually hugs I really liked your idea with her ditching the guy for the jewler...how else to keep getting better jewelry...and the competitive angle works too (with little sis especially)

 

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how about the "swap" twist- good idea or too much?

 

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I have different suggestion: The jeweller is very old and he only want's to watch the sex between the married couple at their first night. The guy agrees without telling his future wife...But he doesn't know that the jeweler hire 2 rapist which also take their turn with the bride...

I don't care for the rape angle, but your voyeur version I like. How about you write it? By the time I get to the alternate version, if ever, time will separate the versions enough, and I will make sure mine uses different names, details etc.