Futa-female interracial nonconsent, 6k words

[MartletMartlet]

This will be the second story that I submit to Literotica and it will be chapter 1 of a possible short series. It's about an 18 year old futa and her MILF sex slave.

I'm looking for any general reader/reviewer. I think I've done a good job of avoiding spelling and grammar mistakes, I'm more worried about the deeper stuff like characterization, plot, pacing, writing style etc. I'd also appreciate help with making sure the character doesn't come across as underaged, and if possible I would especially appreciate help with writing grammatically correct AAVE dialogue. Thanks in advance.

 

[Rohitsharm3339]

Provide a link to the story

 

[MartletMartlet]

Provide a link to the story

It's still a draft - if you would like to edit I will send it privately

 

[Rohitsharm3339]

Sure