From the depths of my soul...

[Basia]

From the depth of my soul
I give to you
The Promise of my love,
The gift of my heart.

From the depths of my mind,
I let the words flow,
as water would down a stream.

From the depths of my heart,
I hold a special place for you alone.
Without you there,
I cannot feel whole.

Within my entire being,
I know only one thing to be true.
It is how much I love you.

I was told that
First-sight love does not exist.
That all changed
The moment I met you.

From that first smile,
and the twinkle of you eyes,
I knew that I would be yours,
Now, and forever more.

It hurts to be apart from you,
It hurts to see you cry.
It hurts to not touch you,
Or to hear your voice.

It took me a while
to find peace in my heart.
But you helped me.
You showed me the way.

I do not know
What I would do
Without you.

 

[T.H. Oughts]

Mmmmmmmm so beautiful.... if only someone would send me a poem like that.......

 

[sch00lteacher]

Someone is very lucky to have the heart of someone like you Basia.

Excellent poem.

Nuff said.

 

[Nighthunter]

that was marvelous Basia, now excuse me, i have to cry now.

 

[espressolover]

basia

That is truly a beautiful poem.
Did you write that, or did someone send it to you?

Either way, it moved me to tears...thank you so much for sharing.

espressolover

 

[T.H. Oughts]

Mmmmmmmm so beautiful.... if only someone would send me a poem like that.......

They did, they did... thanks

 

[Guest]

Basia,

Your poem is so beautiful. The emotions inside your heart were captured so clearly and distinctly through your words. Words are so powerful, aren't they?

"It hurts to be apart from you,
It hurts to see you cry.
It hurts to not touch you,
Or to hear your voice.

It took me a while
to find peace in my heart.
But you helped me.
You showed me the way."

Such a beautiful example of your raw emotions coming forth with such force - I know of what you write. I have felt what you describe. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Enchanted

 

[knightstalker]

Whipping tears away

You should submit that poem into one of the poem sights ..I would love to send that to my girlfriend she would love it ..That was very beautiful

 

[LRC]

Sigh .........

very touching .......
very true.

 

[SexuallyGifted]

VERY NICE, I would say more but I don't know what I can say that every one else has'nt already said

 

[Jazzy2]

Man, I'm crying and it ain't tears of joy

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[Jazzy2]

Re: Whipping tears away

You should submit that poem into one of the poem sights ..I would love to send that to my girlfriend she would love it ..That was very beautiful

Uh, uh. Don't do it. Have you been to the "Story & Poetry Feedback" section lately? Wouldn't be a cool thing. Can you say, "cliche"?

Diggin' what you're sayin', but 'depth of my soul'? Bad. Bad. Stay far away from Unmasked Poet. It wouldn't be cool. Do not post this to New Poems.

jazzy2

 

[knightstalker]

I should have been more specific with my words ..I was thinking some of the poetry sights i go to once in awhile not the one in here ..Still think it was a lovley poem