Freestyle Battle Here

[Ravin the Poet]

Time to let out in the inner rapper inside you. Drop some lines, somewhere between 8-12 would be best, but more is great as well. Say what ever you want, diss who you want (in good fun) or do what I do, and who ever is above you, just diss them. This isn't suppose to be taken serious, just fun. Hey I'm young and like rap. Anyone up for some freestyle.


I'll start...


We're all out for beauty, and a jolly good time
But I'm just here to speak with rhythm and rhyme
I’m not into the bullshit or the swag little games
Because the people of lit are truly insane
I’m dropped because I’m young
Hit harder because I act tough
Go to the BDSM boards
The people over there like it rough
Not me though, I’m gentle,
The calm cool kind of guy
Who’s going to challenge Ravin
Since it’s time for me to say good bye

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Yo...word.

Ravin the P,
You've challenged Abs,
I use my words to give y'all stabs.
I Like to write erotic stuff
but I also like to write some fluff,
I think the AH is really groovy
met some folks whose lives should be a movie,
I own a cafe' where the cool folks roam,
that's why the AH is my home.
Some be serious while some be silly,
You get to see tits and sometimes a willy.
but you get to meet folks from the whole world wide,
and some match my insults stride for stride.
So I tip my hat and light my cigar,
Have to go see if they wrecked my bar.

Yo, PDiddyAbs...keepin it real.
Peace out.

 

[Black Tulip]

I'll try to come up with a rhyme to call home
That won't be easy cos the speak ain't my own
I like this place in the virtual space

It all comes together as one big caboodle
All tits and asses and cocks in ya noodle
I like this place in the virtual space

It's all about stories, words and discussions
No topic will last cos we all love diversions
I like this place in the virtual space

This rap is like shit on a solid gold platter
Watch out for the smell and the horrible splatter
I like this place in the virtual space

 

[Ravin the Poet]

Was impressed by your courage
but not by your skill
If this was sex
I suggest you use the pill
Stop you from doing this
stop the brutal nature that you become
Say two words slow, as I draw out my gun
From back in the day, my nest I sit
I learned and I sprang
as I watched a women play with hr clit
But this is worse, I can't believe the things you say
PdiddayAbs, that shit belongs at Swiss Chalet
thanks for the rose, I guess thats your mark
Mine is a trail of lady
just look for the ones with the broken hearts

 

[cantdog]

I love the story; the chick is the shit
But I need to lay off the long edit
And do some new bit-- hit the boards at lit
See some action get distraction loosen up from all my compaction
Too much density in the grammar
Too much intensity take a break
Into immensity on the 'net
Whatsat I see? it's a bird head
With a new thread
And he's talking wild it's a ravin child
but what he don't get
Is that we ain't shit we cain't do it
We ain't old but we're all cold and scientific not beatific
It's a different kind of terrific
Cause an editor ai'nt a predator
And grammar not a hammer
So before I stammer I tell the bird shoo
Cause we got to do what we do and think it all through
It's all in the head
I mean this ain't my kinda thread

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Sup Blackbird?
Y'all don't know the shit.
Gettin up your sass aint down in Lit.


R-E-S-P-E-C-T is what y'all earn from me,
Smackin you down, I'll do for free.

I'll pop a cap in yo rhymin,
ain't no cherry, got no hymen,

Tits and ass ain't all I got,
Y'all ain't messin wit no tot.

So get your raggedy ass out in the street,
type with your hands and not your feet,

Hope your doo rag don't get unfurled,
but youse a pup in Abs's world.