Flirt!!!
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Daddyslilpet
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ewww packing and moving is no fun darlin. {{Hugs}}
I'm doing alright. Just bored and horny. Bad combo, gets me in troubles....lol.
I'm doing alright. Just bored and horny. Bad combo, gets me in troubles....lol.
Daddyslilpet
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LOL. I hear ya darlin.
Of course what I wouldn't give to get in some trouble right about now.
*ohhhh Maaassttterrrrrr*
Of course what I wouldn't give to get in some trouble right about now.
*ohhhh Maaassttterrrrrr*
Daddyslilpet
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Of course now the little ones are bugging me to feed them again.
I swear they wanna eat ALL the time....LOL. I better go feed the little masters.
I'll be back later.
I swear they wanna eat ALL the time....LOL. I better go feed the little masters.
I'll be back later.
FungiUg
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niteshade said:Fungi!!!!!!!!!!
Where have you been???
Poke in the right spot, and I might squeal. And, yes, I do bruise easily.
Been buying a house.
Pokes hard in lots of spots to see which ones make her squeal, and which ones leave the best bruises.
Cleopatra
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Niteshade, I forgot to tell you...
I read your stories, and voted. I liked them quite a bit! The first one I enjoyed for the vivid imagery. If I had any criticism at all, it would be that there may have been *too much* if that's possible. I remember thinking as I read it, "wow - these are fantastic adjectives. She must have an excellent thesaurus...."
The second one I didn't think of anything but the story, so I guess I don't have any criticisms. They were both extremely well written and well edited, which is key, especially when you're trying to create moods, which I think you did very successfully.
Two thumbs up.
I read your stories, and voted. I liked them quite a bit! The first one I enjoyed for the vivid imagery. If I had any criticism at all, it would be that there may have been *too much* if that's possible. I remember thinking as I read it, "wow - these are fantastic adjectives. She must have an excellent thesaurus...."
The second one I didn't think of anything but the story, so I guess I don't have any criticisms. They were both extremely well written and well edited, which is key, especially when you're trying to create moods, which I think you did very successfully.
Two thumbs up.
niteshade
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Cleo32 said:Niteshade, I forgot to tell you...
I read your stories, and voted. I liked them quite a bit! The first one I enjoyed for the vivid imagery. If I had any criticism at all, it would be that there may have been *too much* if that's possible. I remember thinking as I read it, "wow - these are fantastic adjectives. She must have an excellent thesaurus...."
The second one I didn't think of anything but the story, so I guess I don't have any criticisms. They were both extremely well written and well edited, which is key, especially when you're trying to create moods, which I think you did very successfully.
Two thumbs up.
Thanks Cleo. I didn't actually use a thesaurus... I just hate it when I am reading something and the author keeps using the same words over and over again, so I may have gone a bit overboard in my attempt to keep from doing that. LOL... actually, I had forgotten all about that nasty email. Thanks for the feedback, I appriciate it. 
