Deviantsoul
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http://www.i.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=1467115
Hello all,
I recently submitted a story and would appreciate any feedback you have on it. I've got four more chapters so far to submit on this story arc, all around the same length (10k+ word count). Any feedback that I could I receive would allow me to refine these pre-submittal.
Thanks again in advance and happy reading all!
Hello all,
I recently submitted a story and would appreciate any feedback you have on it. I've got four more chapters so far to submit on this story arc, all around the same length (10k+ word count). Any feedback that I could I receive would allow me to refine these pre-submittal.
Thanks again in advance and happy reading all!