final chapter help needed- BF/WM Interracial

[Midnight_Flux]

Hi Guys,

I need an editor to read a final chapter of Ain't Budging- it is set in the 1970's and features interracial (bf/wm) and vaguely bondagey sex. In this one Theresa is carted off by a group of bikers to a bar much to Rhett's chagrin. I am still polishing it up, but it ought to be ready to be dished out to any brave eyes within the next week...and I do mean brave as due to the socio-historical context, the personalities in the story, and my own horrendous idea of romance, there is lingo and themes that some have found unpalatable.

Anyway if you're curious and wondering if this is something you could enjoy editing, here is the first and second stories in the series :-

Ain't Budging http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=427851
Ain't Budging 2 http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=435144

I need an American preferably to look at my story- I am not American myself, so my lack of nuance with US English is likely to come across.

The last chapter is about 12,000 words long.

Cheers,

Mwah x

MFlux

 

[driphoney]

Your stuff's great; you're too humble. I hope you found an editor. And methinks some of that unpalatable lingo, etc. might be code for "You're a better writer than I am and I'm jealous"!!