I have published 60 stories that generally score well but never seem to catch everything self-editing. I should be done in the next few days and estimate about 20K words. It is primarily lesbian submissive story but this time she submits to a married male/female couple as her lesbian mistress hands her off to some friend. This is the final chapter in The Principal's Turn series. Lizzie began as a side character but developed a life of her own.
Gramar and punctuation help appreciated, but open to all editing ideas, for character development, story line suggestions etc. I would also like your thought on which category you would suggest publishing it under.
If you are interested and available, please let me know.
Thanks
rimaday
Gramar and punctuation help appreciated, but open to all editing ideas, for character development, story line suggestions etc. I would also like your thought on which category you would suggest publishing it under.
If you are interested and available, please let me know.
Thanks
rimaday