Editing help needed for submissive/Lesbian/Loving wife themed story 20Kish words

rimaday

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I have published 60 stories that generally score well but never seem to catch everything self-editing. I should be done in the next few days and estimate about 20K words. It is primarily lesbian submissive story but this time she submits to a married male/female couple as her lesbian mistress hands her off to some friend. This is the final chapter in The Principal's Turn series. Lizzie began as a side character but developed a life of her own.

Gramar and punctuation help appreciated, but open to all editing ideas, for character development, story line suggestions etc. I would also like your thought on which category you would suggest publishing it under.

If you are interested and available, please let me know.
Thanks
rimaday
 
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