Fem-Lust?

[slyc_willie]

I'm trying to write an eight way with hot tubs and an Anaconda and wanted to read up on horn dog ladies.

For a moment, I thought this was the Naked Party thread . . . .

 

[slyc_willie]

Solo bump.

 

[JackLuis]

I ran through most of the references cited and found that many are in alternate realities, werewolf and stuff. I was looking for more realistic fare, for research. Seemed to be a lot of cock sucking and while I guess that's good material, I was looking for something else.

I'm not sure that Horny Springs can carry a shape shifter, unless I write a coed dreaming. Hum, that could work, but not in the short term.

I'll try Penn Lady. her hockey story was pretty good and maybe she's got something I can use?

 

[slyc_willie]

Yeah, Secret was best known for her Leader of the Pack series. She's got some others, but admittedly, she writes with a supernatural backdrop to almost all of her stories.

 

[Safe_Bet]

... Seemed to be a lot of cock sucking and while I guess that's good material, I was looking for something else.

Hmmmmm... I don't recall much of that in my suggestions for some reason.

 

[JackLuis]

"Island Encounter" by Penn Lady is a 5. Although I was looking for female POV, Miss Sofie was interesting one handed read.

I'll check out SB Usurpers ref's next.

 

[PennLady]

"Island Encounter" by Penn Lady is a 5. Although I was looking for female POV, Miss Sofie was interesting one handed read.

I'll check out SB Usurpers ref's next.

Thanks, Jack. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wrote that sort of on request, by a guy, and that is probably why it's a male POV. King's Bay also has a male POV, but I think the woman in there is pretty definite about what she wants.

 

[JackLuis]

Thanks, Jack. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wrote that sort of on request, by a guy, and that is probably why it's a male POV. King's Bay also has a male POV, but I think the woman in there is pretty definite about what she wants.

I read "Facing the Past," and gave it a 5. Not too erotic, but a tear jerker.

I better go mow the lawn, or the dog will get lost in it.

 

[Stella_Omega]

Well I see that my Friday will be a day of Fem-Lust. Thanks you ladies, and gents, that should fill in around mowing the lawn and planting some daisies.
Humm, where to start?

I'm trying to write an eight way with hot tubs and an Anaconda and wanted to read up on horn dog ladies.

Sounds like you also need to read up on plumbing and zoo keeping.

(isn't horndog a great word?)

 

[JackLuis]

Sounds like you also need to read up on plumbing and zoo keeping.

(isn't horndog a great word?)

I don't think the hot tubs will leak, and it's more of a black snake, but fatter.

 

[JackLuis]

Oh, dampanties, "Between What's Wrong and Right" was very good, as the score shows.

Although I have been looking for hetro stories, for research, your story was interesting because of how you compressed time and expressed the emotion rather than the 'blow, by blow' sex. Love not Lust I guess is the best way to describe it.

It gave me some perspective on writing for women, who as we know are the major market.

 

[damppanties]

Oh, dampanties, "Between What's Wrong and Right" was very good, as the score shows.

Thank you.

Although I have been looking for hetro stories, for research, your story was interesting because of how you compressed time and expressed the emotion rather than the 'blow, by blow' sex. Love not Lust I guess is the best way to describe it.

It gave me some perspective on writing for women, who as we know are the major market.

It seems I've gradually been shifting into the Romance genre as I move through the years. The sex seems to sit better with me if it's more than just wham, bam, thank you ma'am.

 

[Dyslexicea]

Oh, dampanties, "Between What's Wrong and Right" was very good, as the score shows.

Although I have been looking for hetro stories, for research, your story was interesting because of how you compressed time and expressed the emotion rather than the 'blow, by blow' sex. Love not Lust I guess is the best way to describe it.

It gave me some perspective on writing for women, who as we know are the major market.

Why can't your stories include, plot, love, romance, emotions, lust and sex. What would make you think we aren't at times lustful and sexual. There are times, love, romance, emotions have nothing to do with sex, we can be just lustful our goal being glorious sex with many orgasms.

When I do read erotica I love a well written sex scene. What I don't like is the typical Lit lesbian sex scene, which is a little kissing, a little breast play and her face between my legs.

What we want, hetero, bi, lesbian is real sex scenes. Wham Bam thank you ma'am doesn't cut it. Although I don't object to a quickie scene, or in real life, she pushes me against the wall ravishing me with her fingers kind of sex. If you write that kind of sex scene you'd better be really heavy on the lust part, the need to be taken by my lover, her need to take me, dominate me, make me scream in ecstasy.

If your writing a novel and your writing for us, you need all of the above to be really successful.

PS. If you're writing for hetero women, it doesn't hurt to make your hero a bit of a bad boy, one who's dominant, aggressive and assertive but also gentle, kind and loving. A man who is just going to take her but in so doing he's going to fulfill all her lustful needs. Don't forget she also wants to fulfill all his needs. No men like that, so what, women do have fantasies and maybe just a little hope such creatures do exist.

Oh my god, I'm telling some dude how to write a hetero woman's fantasy hero. Someone wake me up I must be having a nightmare.

 

[TxRad]

The darkside isn't so dark when everyone has a flashlight.

You want lust? Here's a couple.

A way of Life

Mother Knows Best

 

[Handley_Page]

I'd love to know how these pushy, horny women would deal with a chap who's not got an instant hard-on for her ?

I mean she's almost boxed herself into a tricky situation. What does she do ?
Make him a cup of tea and feed him Viagra with the biscuits ?

OR quietly put her coat on and go find someone with a bit of vinegar ?

 

[Safe_Bet]

I'd love to know how these pushy, horny women would deal with a chap who's not got an instant hard-on for her ?

I mean she's almost boxed herself into a tricky situation. What does she do ?
Make him a cup of tea and feed him Viagra with the biscuits ?

OR quietly put her coat on and go find someone with a bit of vinegar ?

I don't know... how does a pushy, horny man "deal with it"?


BTW, sexist much?

 

[Stella_Omega]

I'd love to know how these pushy, horny women would deal with a chap who's not got an instant hard-on for her ?

Easy-- we simply re-write that part of the story so that he does.

I mean she's almost boxed herself into a tricky situation. What does she do ?
Make him a cup of tea and feed him Viagra with the biscuits ?

OR quietly put her coat on and go find someone with a bit of vinegar ?

Sit on his face?

A tight cock ring works too. The blood can go in, but it can't come out.

Just in case you want to write a little non-con.

But really, the convo is about the different point of view.

 

[JackLuis]

Why can't your stories include, plot, love, romance, emotions, lust and sex. What would make you think we aren't at times lustful and sexual.
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Oh my god, I'm telling some dude how to write a hetero woman's fantasy hero. Someone wake me up I must be having a nightmare.

I think I have the sex descriptions down ok. I was looking for the hooks. And what's wrong with asking for what you want, instead of wondering why he doesn't "know what you want?"

Bad Boys? I am trying to write a romance. I think I've laid the foundation for a giving man in HSR #3/4, and let him run a little loose on #6. Later after he shoots the drug dealer in a saloon Maureen wonders if he's who she thought he was? That kind of thing?

But what about Bad Girls/Women? The kind that will just fuck you silly and walk away laughing? I think that's harder to pull off though from the first part of "A Way Of Life" it looks like Tx is going that way. (Thanks Tx, I was looking for fem-POV by women, but I like your stuff too.)

One of the problems with Horny Springs is that I have so many characters to get laid, that I get spread out. In HS#5 I tried to segment the story to show how the youngsters, 'do it.'

I seems to get better scores if my protag, 'spreads his seed' widely. My best scores seem to come from lots of sex chapters, HS#4 and Spreading Seeds #10.

I think I'll have Foxy do a chapter next. I was trying to write a 'clusterfuck' but it's so hard! Foxy has been in the hopper for a while and he is a pivotal character, I think I write his exposure to would be lesbianisim next. I'll bet I get some comments from that.

 

[TxRad]

I think I have the sex descriptions down ok. I was looking for the hooks. And what's wrong with asking for what you want, instead of wondering why he doesn't "know what you want?"

Bad Boys? I am trying to write a romance. I think I've laid the foundation for a giving man in HSR #3/4, and let him run a little loose on #6. Later after he shoots the drug dealer in a saloon Maureen wonders if he's who she thought he was? That kind of thing?

But what about Bad Girls/Women? The kind that will just fuck you silly and walk away laughing? I think that's harder to pull off though from the first part of "A Way Of Life" it looks like Tx is going that way. (Thanks Tx, I was looking for fem-POV by women, but I like your stuff too.)

One of the problems with Horny Springs is that I have so many characters to get laid, that I get spread out. In HS#5 I tried to segment the story to show how the youngsters, 'do it.'

I seems to get better scores if my protag, 'spreads his seed' widely. My best scores seem to come from lots of sex chapters, HS#4 and Spreading Seeds #10.

I think I'll have Foxy do a chapter next. I was trying to write a 'clusterfuck' but it's so hard! Foxy has been in the hopper for a while and he is a pivotal character, I think I write his exposure to would be lesbianisim next. I'll bet I get some comments from that.

If you want them fucking your brains out and then walking away, try this one on for size.

Wet

Don't bail at the start. It runs the whole bad girl/ good girl gambit and then some.

 

[JackLuis]

If you want them fucking your brains out and then walking away, try this one on for size.

Wet

Don't bail at the start. It runs the whole bad girl/ good girl gambit and then some.

Juicy!

 

[TxRad]

Juicy!

Decisions, decisions

 

[emap]

I don't get it, why is it harder to write up a woman who will just fuck a guy at the drop of a hat? Men do that very fucking thing all the damn time.

Alright so a little more horn tooting, read Call me Booty, bad girl with a heart of gold, not really but hell it's my damn story so shut up. She is an exhibionist so will just fuck somebody at the drop of a hat, so long as there are people watching. More than just sex but there is plenty of sex, she's lustful after all.

Sometimes I wonder about you men, want lusty women who can take charge, but don't read the damn stories about them.

Just in case you can't figure out how to click my name, here is a link to my stories. http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=356867&page=submissions

Wanders away muttering about silly men.

 

[damppanties]

I'd love to know how these pushy, horny women would deal with a chap who's not got an instant hard-on for her ?

I mean she's almost boxed herself into a tricky situation. What does she do ?
Make him a cup of tea and feed him Viagra with the biscuits ?

OR quietly put her coat on and go find someone with a bit of vinegar ?

Easy-- we simply re-write that part of the story so that he does. Sit on his face?

A tight cock ring works too. The blood can go in, but it can't come out.

Just in case you want to write a little non-con.

But really, the convo is about the different point of view.

Or fingers. A (hard) penis is not the only thing that works in a man.

 

[damppanties]

Why can't your stories include, plot, love, romance, emotions, lust and sex.

To be fair, the thread is titled female lust, not female everything and I believe JackLuis is looking for stories that have the lust part only, or at least amplified in relation to the emotions part. This doesn't mean that everything else doesn't exist, but it's simply not what he's trying to research at the moment. <-- That's my perception of his thread, not trying to speak for him here.

JackLuis, you kind of read the wrong one if you were looking for lust, not love. Try Natural Tease if you like.

Oh, and the whole issue of femdom -- is it in the same domain of what we're talking about here?

 

[JackLuis]

To be fair, the thread is titled female lust, not female everything and I believe JackLuis is looking for stories that have the lust part only, or at least amplified in relation to the emotions part. This doesn't mean that everything else doesn't exist, but it's simply not what he's trying to research at the moment. <-- That's my perception of his thread, not trying to speak for him here.

JackLuis, you kind of read the wrong one if you were looking for lust, not love. Try Natural Tease if you like.

Oh, and the whole issue of femdom -- is it in the same domain of what we're talking about here?

Yes now we have it. Natural Tease is more what I wanted to read. I must say after roaming the lists, I still haven't found exactly what I was looking for, not sure I know now what I started for.

What I have found is that there is a lot of stroke in women's work but emotion is harder to write.

Dialog/narrative balance is delicate, particularly with first person. Spreading Seeds was my first attempt at first person and I found it hard to keep it pure. I confess to losing it once in an early chapter. I wanted to add some of what the girls were thinking, but stuck with first person for 41 chapters.

Horny Springs is 3rd person and more liberating. Also the cast list is larger and more varied. More soap opera than single threaded, which allow for a lot of room to maneuver and explore.

emap's "Longwood Day One" is good, but it's anxious to make a impression and misses my mark, but still a strong Cherokee protag reminds me of my mother.

Back to my Fem-Lust reading. Thanks ladies I'm enjoying the ride.