Feedback?

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Can some of you please read my stories, and poems and give me some feedback? I'm open to constructive criticism, and ideas. Thanks.

http://www.literotica.com/s/from-fantasy-to-reality-3

http://www.literotica.com/s/hot-black-coffee

http://www.literotica.com/s/judys-tan

http://www.literotica.com/s/judys-conscience

http://www.literotica.com/s/matts-18th-birthday

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-first-kiss-2