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I'd like to thank whoever has just left some extremely useful constructive criticism of one of the threads in the Tau Ceti story. (Possibly jtzmm ?) Re-reading the thread in question ('Head for the Mountains') I found I agreed with the comments completely, and re-wrote the thread. Thanks to everyone who bothers to leave feedback, it really is very much appreciated, and helpful in improving the story.
 
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Fencer said:
I'd like to thank whoever has just left some extremely useful constructive criticism of one of the threads in the Tau Ceti story. (Possibly jtzmm ?) Re-reading the thread in question ('Head for the Mountains') I found I agreed with the comments completely, and re-wrote the thread. Thanks again!

It would be great if there was more of this type of review going on. A story can only get better if someone can make some suggestions to make it better.
 
I did leave a couple of short comments as I read through the story, but I can't take credit for that particular one.

(Though reading it over I see what was changed and I approve...I remember thinking it was slightly unrealistic that he'd be feeling aroused at that particular moment, no matter how hot the women chasing him were.)
 
I used to leave lots of comments on threads in stories, but slacked off.

One feature I wish they had was a tag on the comments indicating who the comments are from.
 
In a way I kind of like that they're anonymous. No worries about leaving criticism, and none of this 'I scratch your back, you scratch mine' business that I see on so many other writing sites.

One thing I would like however is a slightly larger comment box, it's be more noticeable and hopefully encourage people to leave slightly longer comments.
 
Jtzmm said:
In a way I kind of like that they're anonymous. No worries about leaving criticism, and none of this 'I scratch your back, you scratch mine' business that I see on so many other writing sites.

I would at least like the option of...um..."nonymous" commenting. :confused: I already "sign" my comments, provided that the author knows me somehow or otherwise can find my email address. I do this because I want to be able to discuss the thread, and many writers have gotten back to me about the passages I've commented on. I say this is a much better way of improving stories given what we have to work with on Chyoo v2.
 
It would be awesome if commenting was automatically directed to a forum thread about the story.
 
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