Feedback wanted from all!

[ShyGuy68]

About a month ago I got this story

At The Market Square

published on Lit, and so far I have gotten some good votes on it.

But I would also like to know if anybody would be interested in reading a continuation, and if there is any improvements I should make?

So feel free to let me "have it" when you've read it, I look forward to hear some opinions and suggestions from you!

 

[ShyGuy68]

Hmm what to do? Doesn't anybody have any feedback on my story?? Come on now, don't be shy.

 

[Hecate]

*lol* I know I am biased but hey .....

.. you asked so here goes:

Yes please , continue it .. and you know bloody well why ! *g*