Nightscream89
novice writer
- Joined
- Nov 11, 2024
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This morning my new story was published:
https://www.literotica.com/s/a-writers-dream-1
I had a lot of struggles writing this to be honest. Writing two characters into one character was more difficult than I thought and the build up is maybe a bit longer than I had envisioned. But I didn't really see a way to shorten it without making it feel rushed, so I decided to keep it anyway.
I would love some feedback on this, mainly on how well you think I did with the whole two characters in one character writing. Were the feelings clear enough and was it clear enough how the two character's feelings meshed together?
I know the supernatural aspect of this isn't really apparant until the very end, but I promise this will be explored more in future parts.
https://www.literotica.com/s/a-writers-dream-1
I had a lot of struggles writing this to be honest. Writing two characters into one character was more difficult than I thought and the build up is maybe a bit longer than I had envisioned. But I didn't really see a way to shorten it without making it feel rushed, so I decided to keep it anyway.
I would love some feedback on this, mainly on how well you think I did with the whole two characters in one character writing. Were the feelings clear enough and was it clear enough how the two character's feelings meshed together?
I know the supernatural aspect of this isn't really apparant until the very end, but I promise this will be explored more in future parts.
