Feedback Request : PokeYerMom

[BadMrBoogie]

First story on a new account after 5 years, and I didn't have anyone to bounce ideas off of. I've changed my writing style and trying new POV changes. Spoof of the Pokémon Gameboy games, and I really had fun with it and hope it shows.
https://www.literotica.com/s/monster-trainer-pokeyermom
Any and all feedback is welcome. Thanks in advance.