KatPurrs Literotica Guru Joined Jul 24, 2001 Posts 540 Aug 3, 2001 #1 I would love some feedback on this poem too. Thanks for your time and effort to help! I enjoy writing very much and want to learn how to improve so any and all responses will be very much appreciated!
I would love some feedback on this poem too. Thanks for your time and effort to help! I enjoy writing very much and want to learn how to improve so any and all responses will be very much appreciated!
T TWB I Love Hineys Joined Aug 7, 2001 Posts 33,465 Aug 14, 2001 #2 Perhaps your grip on my ears was a bit too close to you, but I could not find the url..
