Feedback on slow burn couple swap story

[prisonmike1987]

https://literotica.com/s/evolution-of-an-indian-couple-ch-01

Just discovered the forum section today, and would love some feedback on my story.

Although, the characters are of Indian origin, I like to think that this doesn't affect the plot in any way. I like slow burn because I feel it gives the reader a chance to relate with the characters, even map them to real humans in their real life. These stories are a bit old, and I recently learned that my grammar isn't as good as I assumed. So I will work on improving that.

 

[AngstIgnored]

Although, the characters are of Indian origin, I like to think that this doesn't affect the plot in any way.

I agree, which is why I'm a bit surprised that the story only has one tag, namely 'indian' for some reason. If that's the only thing that mattered to you enough to rate a tag when you published it, the above is an interesting comment.

Nothing stood out as particularly objectionable in the first part, other than a few grammar and spelling issues. I'm not personally interested in the swapping thing myself, so I didn't read past the first part and it's very brief, somewhat rushed description of sex between a couple characters.