Need feedback on my story

[manwar]

I would like to know if the level of detail is a turn on or a put off in my stories?

Below is a mother and son relationship series.

https://www.literotica.com/s/memories-of-an-indian-man-ch-01

 

[AnnieLit]

You might get more interest if you include the topic of your story in the post. Or at least get fewer people annoyed that they have to click through only to find out that there is no way they are touching that type of a story.