Feedback on part two of my story!

[Coquetteprincess]

Hi!

The second part of my story was just published and I’d love to get some feedback on it. It’s a fdom/msub abuse of authority type of story…

https://www.literotica.com/s/ms-jones-punishes-joey

Here’s my thread about part one:

https://forum.literotica.com/threads/feedback-on-my-first-fdom-msub-story.1622961/

 

[Presider]

I really envy your use of restraint here. You really put the reader in his shoes because you leave us just as desperate for more as he is. Cleverly done

 

[Coquetteprincess]

I really envy your use of restraint here. You really put the reader in his shoes because you leave us just as desperate for more as he is. Cleverly done

Thank you so much!!! Hehehe