Hi, looking for feedback on my first story. It's got a lot of dirty talk and is a gay male story. Specifically, I felt it got a little too long for the content, and I'm not sure I did enough to establish the characters. Let me know, thanks!
https://www.literotica.com/s/king-and-i-1
https://www.literotica.com/s/king-and-i-1