Feedback on "Instructions..."

[Kego180081]

Hi all,

I'm relatively new to Lit, and I'm already a huge fan.

I read "Instructions..." the other day, and it was amazing! I followed the instructions to the letter, and had such a wild time I had to sit on a towel! I have sent a message to the author, prasing his ability to make me scream, but I noticed he hasn't posted anything to lit for over 6 months.

Has anyone else read this story, and if so, can any of you recommend another story written in this style? I love the commanding stories which make me do things I've never done before!

If you are an author who has written a story in this style, I promise to send you a detailed reply as to how I got on!

Love to all,
Kego.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Hi Kego,

It's a very good idea to include a link to a story if you'd like people to read it. You can do that easily enough by going to the story, then copying the URL (the address that appears in the window at the top of Excel) and then pasting it into your message to the board. That way people can get to the story with one click and are a lot more likely to read it and respond.

---dr.M.

 

[toffeegyrl]

I believe she's referring to this one: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=22285

I enjoyed it, but it seemed a bit rushed toward the end; I wanted to be teased more...

Which, I believe, is a good sign, no?

 

[Kego180081]

Opps! Sorry.

Thanks ToffeeGyrl, that's the one I was talking about. I know what you're saying about being a bit rushed... but the style is fantastic!

Love to all,
Kego