Feedback greatly wanted…mutual masturbation story

[babyface23]

Hi all,

I just had my fourth story published here, and I’d love honest feedback on it. Do I need more character development? More details? More description?

I’d like to continue on for at least a few lore installments, and while it’s been rated very favorably, there hasn’t been many ratings and far fewer comments.

Can you help a brotha out?

https://www.literotica.com/s/confessions-at-work

 

[drunkwombat]

I thought it was great, I didn't see any problems with it.

 

[HannahBaird]

Absolutely loved this story and I highly recommend it to anyone. It leaves itself open to such a fantastic sequel, and props to realistic but still sexy body types.