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Mothbite

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Hello all,

So the other day, I was helping clean up around my youth pastor's house. I once was a high schooler under him, used to intern for him a year back and I still help him with stuff every now and then.

This time around, when started cleaning around the pool, his wife comes out. Now, she usually wears modest, baggy clothes when the children are around, but this time around, she was wearing a bathing suit. Now, it may have been a modest one-piece, but it couldn't hide the fact that she had one rocking body.

Now, in real life, I'm a pretty good boy. What I want is somebody to write what may have happened if both my youth pastor's wife and I behaved very 'badly' that day? What if the pastor hadn't been around when I was presented with that fine figure? What if our self-restraint was that of a ten-year old's?

Edit: I'm looking for more of a "friendly exchange slowly takes an erotic turn" rather than a seduction on the part of either characters. I want the action taking place right in the pool, evtnually moving inside the house. She's a Caucasian brunette with hair down just past her shoulders, C-sized, medium-sized but shapely behind. Ages in question are 19 (me) and 29 (her). Aliases are Ben and Allison, respectively.

She's initially surprised when things turn hot, but is surprisingly open to it once things get underway. While not saying it outright, you could maybe guess that just like she's seeking freedom from baggy clothes, she's seeking freedom from her sexual constraints. Which could lead to maybe further experiments if this turns into a series. Church bathroom during a service, pastor's office, etc.

If you want any other details, ask away.
 
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elaborate here. The more info you give here the more authors will get interested. Which not only increases the chances of one of them actually finishing the damned thing but also gives you the chance to get multiple versions of the story.
 
Edit: I'm looking for more of a "friendly exchange slowly takes an erotic turn" rather than a seduction on the part of either characters. I want the action taking place in the pool, then inside the house. She's a brunette with hair down just past her shoulders, C-sized, medium-sized but shapely behind. Ages in question are 19 (me) and 29 (her)

She's initially surprised when things turn hot, but is surprisingly open to it once things get underway. While not saying it outright, you could maybe guess that just like she's seeking freedom from baggy clothes, she's seeking freedom from her sexual constraints. Which could lead to maybe further experiments if this turns into a series. Church bathroom during a service, pastor's office, etc.

If you want any other details, ask away.
Sounds like something I'd like to read also, because it's grounded in reality (it's unlikely she would have intercourse with anyone other than her husband).

I would have intimate innuendo and "softcore" descriptions rather than graphic actions (no cum on face or urine fetish).
 
Edited in a couple more details. Anyone still up for taking this request?
 
Could somebody please do so? I just got many minutes of my life wasted on fantasies_only trolling my request.
 
Could somebody please do so? I just got many minutes of my life wasted on fantasies_only trolling my request.
I didn't wast your time, YOU have wasted your time.
I never said I was gonna write it for you, you just assumed this.
I was giving you an idea to build on.
 
Could somebody please do so? I just got many minutes of my life wasted on fantasies_only trolling my request.

I was considering helping you out ... it is an intriquing storyline. But, you might want to show a little patience.

I am new to this site but have some stories posted elsewhere and one out for editting here. If you are interested in seeing some of my stories I can direct you to another site where they are posted.

If you want me to write your story, PM me and we can visit about it.
 
Don't be discouraged, Mothbite. Sometimes adding more detail within a thread, instead of asking for PMs, will give you more interested authors. Also, the "be patient" was good advice... Not all authors can spit out a story a day or hour. Lord knows I cannot. In my opinion, a well written, thoughtful piece could take me a month not including editing or waiting for Lit to accept the story. (That step alone could take a couple of weeks. Even longer if there is a contest going on and your story is not part of it.)

As for wasting your time? It's sad... That one has stated since his first day here he would never write porn for this site. :rolleyes:

Just roll with the punches!
 
Hello all,

So the other day, I was helping clean up around my youth pastor's house. I once was a high schooler under him, used to intern for him a year back and I still help him with stuff every now and then.

This time around, when started cleaning around the pool, his wife comes out. Now, she usually wears modest, baggy clothes when the children are around, but this time around, she was wearing a bathing suit. Now, it may have been a modest one-piece, but it couldn't hide the fact that she had one rocking body.

Now, in real life, I'm a pretty good boy. What I want is somebody to write what may have happened if both my youth pastor's wife and I behaved very 'badly' that day? What if the pastor hadn't been around when I was presented with that fine figure? What if our self-restraint was that of a ten-year old's?

PM me if interested.

Edit: I'm looking for more of a "friendly exchange slowly takes an erotic turn" rather than a seduction on the part of either characters. I want the action taking place in the pool, then inside the house. She's a Caucasian brunette with hair down just past her shoulders, C-sized, medium-sized but shapely behind. Ages in question are 19 (me) and 29 (her)

She's initially surprised when things turn hot, but is surprisingly open to it once things get underway. While not saying it outright, you could maybe guess that just like she's seeking freedom from baggy clothes, she's seeking freedom from her sexual constraints. Which could lead to maybe further experiments if this turns into a series. Church bathroom during a service, pastor's office, etc.

If you want any other details, ask away.

Sounds like you have a good handle on what you want in this story. It dose remind me of something that happened when I was a lot younger. We used to have a dance at the church hall once a month all the local youths used to go and it was run by two lay workers for the church, they where pretty naff by modern standards but fun all the same.

Any way the two church workers were about 20 at the time not much older than we were it was about a year after they started that the reason all the young men where coming to the dances, the young women was entertaining them in a back room for a small fee she would go all the way, well it was away to boost church funds if they got any
 
Hey guys,

So, a certain writer had agreed to write the story for me---and he wrote half of it within a week's time, and sent it to me as a progress report/teaser.

It's been two months since then, and no updates. The last time I heard from him was a month and a half ago, where he stated he had been busy but would finish the story within a few weeks time.

While I'd rather not be the party breaker, I'd really rather not be left with half a story (all of which is just build-up). So I want to let people know that I'm still asking if someone will write this one out.
 
Might I just interject here that.....unless you are paying the person to write you a story, they're not really obligated to finish it for you in any certain timeframe or at the expense of anything else of any importance in their life. I can empathize that it could be frustrating, but you really have nothing else you can do except be patient. Or, write it yourself. Perhaps not a viable option but those are all I see. So just let it be known that you're still looking for a writer......but there's no need to lay blame on an unpaid author. Just my two cents.
 
Might I just interject here that.....unless you are paying the person to write you a story, they're not really obligated to finish it for you in any certain timeframe or at the expense of anything else of any importance in their life. I can empathize that it could be frustrating, but you really have nothing else you can do except be patient. Or, write it yourself. Perhaps not a viable option but those are all I see. So just let it be known that you're still looking for a writer......but there's no need to lay blame on an unpaid author. Just my two cents.


I'm not blaming him at all, apologies if that's what it sounds like. I'm just explaining why after so much time, I revived this thread.
 
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