Husband's comparison and derision

[Rob_Royale]

A wife is talking about her slutty best friend one day at dinner and remarking about just how much action she gets.

Husbands reply is something to the effect of 'she's still fucking hot'. His tone of voice sets her off.

"I bet I could still get men like that, if I was interested in trying, that is." She does not enjoy his derisive laugh afterwards when he doesn't even look up from his phone.

"You don't think so?"

He finally looks at her. "You're just a suburban mom now. Get over it."

Now she's angry. "I'm still in good shape. Men still look at me in the checkout lines. I bet I could get plenty of action."

He calls her bluff. "Go for it." He says with a frown and looks back at his phone.

How far does she go? "Does she just get dolled up and walkout one evening, teasing him with the thought of what she might do and then do nothing but see a movie alone? Maybe it starts out that way, but she meets someone. Or maybe her slutty best friend has more friends?

 

[sirhugs]

She needs to take a lover or lovers if you post in LW.

My most commented upon story is Not Another Loving Wives Tale!, posted in LW of course. Description did warn that it was a "little different" . Apparently TOO different. Plot is that wife, Cassie, goes over to console Jim, friend of her and hubby, over his break up. ong section recunts hubby/narrator imagining her fucking Jim, being ok with it as "therapy". Next morning, Cassie returns home well ridden and put away wet. Twist is that it wasn't Jim that fucked her, it was the tentacle monster living under Jim's shower drain. A few commentators got it. Many complained that it ought to be in Nonhuman, which would have ruined it, as far as I'm concerned. A lot slammed hubby was being a wimpy cuck, or Cassie as being a slutty bitch. Current score is 3.11.

It scratched my itch to revisit an LW post, where my Lit writing career started 20 years before.

Another reason not to care is that it broke my hymen for writing TM stories. I did a sequel in Nonhuman where Cassie gets her own TM, then a two parter with another character. The second chapter of that pair is currently my highest rated story. I'm okay with that.

But moral of the story, unless you have thick skin and motivation other than scores or lauditory comments,stay out of LW generally, and especially, don't post there unless there is infidelity. One way to do that is to have her bring slutty friend for a visit, a threeway with hubby and post in Group Sex.

 

[Rob_Royale]

I'm not scared of LW. After 50+ stories that are well recieved, bad reviews by trolls don't bother me a lick.

 

[dirk2024]

A wife is talking about her slutty best friend one day at dinner and remarking about just how much action she gets.

Husbands reply is something to the effect of 'she's still fucking hot'. His tone of voice sets her off.

"I bet I could still get men like that, if I was interested in trying, that is." She does not enjoy his derisive laugh afterwards when he doesn't even look up from his phone.

"You don't think so?"

He finally looks at her. "You're just a suburban mom now. Get over it."

Now she's angry. "I'm still in good shape. Men still look at me in the checkout lines. I bet I could get plenty of action."

He calls her bluff. "Go for it." He says with a frown and looks back at his phone.

How far does she go? "Does she just get dolled up and walkout one evening, teasing him with the thought of what she might do and then do nothing but see a movie alone? Maybe it starts out that way, but she meets someone. Or maybe her slutty best friend has more friends?

Perhaps, in a huff, she goes out that first night after their confrontation. Unprepared, she makes a bad choice and goes to an iffy bar. The clientele don't inspire her and that, coupled with a lack of confidence due to her husbands indifference, convinces her to leave. She goes home, empty handed. Husband is amused, thinking his point is proven.

A couple of days later, she's out with the above mentioned friend and relates the fight and bar scene to her friend, along with her husbands less than respectful response when she goes home.

Friend is angry. Convinces her married friend to go out with her to a salon to get mani-ped, hair dye and trim, the works. Then its a trip to the dress shop. Now, all dolled up they go to the couples house to show off to the dullard of a husband. Then they say, "see you later...." and traipse off into the night.

Husband is now worried.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Perhaps, in a huff, she goes out that first night after their confrontation. Unprepared, she makes a bad choice and goes to an iffy bar. The clientele don't inspire her and that, coupled with a lack of confidence due to her husbands indifference, convinces her to leave. She goes home, empty handed. Husband is amused, thinking his point is proven.

A couple of days later, she's out with the above mentioned friend and relates the fight and bar scene to her friend, along with her husbands less than respectful response when she goes home.

Friend is angry. Convinces her married friend to go out with her to a salon to get mani-ped, hair dye and trim, the works. Then its a trip to the dress shop. Now, all dolled up they go to the couples house to show off to the dullard of a husband. Then they say, "see you later...." and traipse off into the night.

Husband is now worried.

Excellent ideas.