Fall of an Empire

[dr_dave]

Sci-Fi Fantasy

Warning this story contains scenes of rape, bondage, female domination and men being denied orgasm.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=198717

Please check my story out and leave feedback. I really think my writing has improved since my first attempts here, but I would love to hear what you think but most of all I hope it turns you on.

Thanks guys
J

 

[EnglishMuffin]

2 pagez R goody!

 

[secretagentx5]

ummm...ok

sorry bud, i think your story lacks rhyme and reason
why would she wait until he accosts her to spring her trap?
and as for the sudden stockholme's that the guy picks up at the end...<shudders>

the sex was good, though.