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Murakami

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I have a new story up. What began as a thread for John Almighty has metamorphosed into a full blown story in its own right. I am going to try to make each chapter a self contained story. We'll see if that works out.

I've already gotten a few comments, and I'm tweaking the chapters-in-progress, so keep the comments coming. I'm also playing with opening a bit, but nothing that changes the overall story. I hope everyone likes it, and I hope to see contributions soon. Please let me know what you think.

Also, apologies for bad names. I am using the internet to find common names for the various countries involved. I'm just about out of things I could do in Europe, since I don't know that much about the local cultures. Anybody wants to throw in or correct me, go ahead.
 
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Second thread up. These are harder to write than I thought they would be.

Also, to answer Gunde, I am using the net to find these names, so I apologize if I get one wrong. Please message me and I'll fix it.
 
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A lot of revision to the story, based on comments both her and at Stories Online. Please let me know what you think.
 
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