Hypoxia
doesn't watch television
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Other factions will wonder, "Why by?" and "With what?" (As in, what race.) Does she purposely pick a guy? Is she seduced? By friend or cow-orker or stranger? Does she service a gloryhole or pull a train? Some readers will be excited by the suspense. They may demand sequels!There's a faction out there who like the idea of "Did she get pregnant?"
Ah, a little dramatic license. Cue the oom-chicka-wow-wow music.Many of these people also seem to think every women gets pregnant from a single episode of unprotected sex.
But it IS a viable plot bunny. Start with the she-wants-bareback-strange premise. Then visualize an ending. Is she nursing an IR baby? Is she about to dip the test strip in her urine sample? Is she wondering what to tell hubby? Does she see a fuckmate at the door of an STD clinic?If it works for your story, or adds to YOUR thrill, go for it. Otherwise, don't add shit in hopes of a better score. Write the best you can and the scores will eventually come.