It was suggested that I post these questions here.
Recently I started a storyline titled, "Learning the Dance" on which I would like your comments and feedback. http://english.literotica.com:81/st...age=submissions
Christy, a womanling, begins learning about her sexuality from Gloria, a coworker and friend. It's not intended to be a stroke & cum, but perhaps the start of something more, eposodic? My main goal is believability and realism.
My biggest challenge: I am not now, nor have I ever been in a lesbian relationship. Please, those of you with more experience in this category than I, lend me your wisdom.
What I really seek is realism in the story. I want to know if I'm on the right track with my story, Learning the Dance. I ask, are these really things that two women would do? Is the story on the right track as far as an obviously experienced woman who'se seducing a virgin (metaphorically and actually)? Are the expressions believable? Things like that. Also are the converasations realistic?
I guess the biggest question is, when you read the story, are you drawn into it? Do you find yourself skipping over parts, or are you actually interested in the characters and the action? Do you want to read more?
Klvyoenne
Recently I started a storyline titled, "Learning the Dance" on which I would like your comments and feedback. http://english.literotica.com:81/st...age=submissions
Christy, a womanling, begins learning about her sexuality from Gloria, a coworker and friend. It's not intended to be a stroke & cum, but perhaps the start of something more, eposodic? My main goal is believability and realism.
My biggest challenge: I am not now, nor have I ever been in a lesbian relationship. Please, those of you with more experience in this category than I, lend me your wisdom.
What I really seek is realism in the story. I want to know if I'm on the right track with my story, Learning the Dance. I ask, are these really things that two women would do? Is the story on the right track as far as an obviously experienced woman who'se seducing a virgin (metaphorically and actually)? Are the expressions believable? Things like that. Also are the converasations realistic?
I guess the biggest question is, when you read the story, are you drawn into it? Do you find yourself skipping over parts, or are you actually interested in the characters and the action? Do you want to read more?
Klvyoenne
