experience required please

[Kelly Louise]

hiya, I’m just after a little advise from some of you more experienced writers.

I have just posted a new story called Which One, now in this one I use my name and those of the other people involved, it was my second ever attempt at writing a story some years ago that has been collecting micro dust on a disc, but in my other, later stories I don’t use any names. I don’t in an attempt to make the reader feel as if it were they doing the things to me and plus I think they appeal to more readers and the reader can become more ‘involved’ in the action.

do I have it wrong? are names better in a story?

thanks in advance

 

[Pure]

You might try the question in the "Author's Hangout" Kelly. There's an attempt here, in the "Circle" to focus discussion of selected stories. (Yours could of course be one, and you should read the sticky and the information thread about the set up in this forum.)

Best.

 

[Kelly Louise]

well sorry, guess i picked the worng place to ask, there's just so many!!

ty to Pure and the other P that answered me : )

< off to make another cock up no doubt