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[Cruel2BKind]

Mia Culpa,

I think I misunderstood you, too much yammering from someone else.

My apologies if Lifestyle is not the correct word here.

And for the record? You can deny it all you want, but tentacles are a fetish, so there!

I believe that you didn't mean to belittle homosexuality by calling it a lifestyle. I think you were just trying to prove that it wasn't a fetish and you used the wrong word. I just called you out because it certainly LOOKED like you were calling it a 'choice'.

And BTW, it's 'mea culpa' 'e' not 'i' It's latin for 'my bad' or 'my fault' although me and a few of my friends have started saying 'mea maxima culpa' which translates to 'my grievous fault' It's ridiculously fun to say out loud.

 

[sr71plt]

Oh? I thought he had an oar in this thread just to rag on me.

 

[Stella_Omega]

Oh? I thought he had an oar in this thread just to rag on me.

It's such a shame that you make it so easy for him to do, Pilot.

 

[sr71plt]

It's such a shame that you make it so easy for him to do, Pilot.

Yeah, I do see that I started it all. I misread something BB47 posted and posted something based on that misreading. And then I acknowledged in a post that I had misread what BB47 (which I'm guessing was my downfall--I acknowledged I'd been wrong about something) and then Lovecraft68 zipped in with the personal insults. I can see how it was all my fault.

What I really should do to not be the guilty party is what Lovecraft68 is campaigning for--just not post here at all. (Fat chance of that happening.)

 

[voluptuary_manque]

Did I hear 'tentacles'? Hot damn!

 

[manyeyedhydra]

Mmm. I'm trying to think if I've covered this fetish in a story. I like to take various fetishes and dial them up to 11 with occasional lurches into squicky horror.

I suppose Crushed Between Her Breasts might count, or The Biggest Tits in the World. The latter is probably more of an absorption story, or something. I get strange ideas sometimes.

Did I mention the warning about squicky horror. Probably should have put that before the links really.

Hmm. Expansion. One to note down and tackle at a later date I feel.

 

[manyeyedhydra]

Tentacles. That's another one I haven't tackled that I really should have tackled. At least that one will be rectified in a week or so.

 

[BB47]

Mmm. I'm trying to think if I've covered this fetish in a story. I like to take various fetishes and dial them up to 11 with occasional lurches into squicky horror.

I suppose Crushed Between Her Breasts might count, or The Biggest Tits in the World. The latter is probably more of an absorption story, or something. I get strange ideas sometimes.

Did I mention the warning about squicky horror. Probably should have put that before the links really.

Hmm. Expansion. One to note down and tackle at a later date I feel.

If you want to see it done right, look up xxxecil at this site. He's a master of BE with a bit of demonic twinges.

 

[manyeyedhydra]

If you want to see it done right, look up xxxecil at this site. He's a master of BE with a bit of demonic twinges.

Hehe. Yep, XXXecil is a master of big-breast stories. I have an unfortunate habit of killing my protagonists off in weird and unusual ways.

 

[BB47]

Hehe. Yep, XXXecil is a master of big-breast stories. I have an unfortunate habit of killing my protagonists off in weird and unusual ways.

Other than the obvious, death by overexpansion, how would you terminate a wonderfully endowed, buxom leading lady?

 

[voluptuary_manque]

Tentacles. That's another one I haven't tackled that I really should have tackled. At least that one will be rectified in a week or so.

Well for heav . . . , uh goodne . . . , uh whatever's sake make sure you announce it when you publish!

 

[manyeyedhydra]

Other than the obvious, death by overexpansion, how would you terminate a wonderfully endowed, buxom leading lady?

It's usually the leading lady doing the terminating. That material for expansion has to come from somewhere.

Ooh, is that a plot bunny I see haring away into the distance...

 

[Stella_Omega]

nemmind.

 

[sr71plt]

No, just allow lovecraft's chihuahua yapping to remain, visible to all, but ignored by you. Which would also be visible to all.

I do that more than not. That you haven't noticed pretty much shows how effective that is.

 

[Cruel2BKind]

Tentacles. That's another one I haven't tackled that I really should have tackled. At least that one will be rectified in a week or so.

I sorta did it once. It got criticized because I emphasized penetration instead of bondage. Apparently, I 'missed the point'

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-half-breeds-journey

 

[voluptuary_manque]

I sorta did it once. It got criticized because I emphasized penetration instead of bondage. Apparently, I 'missed the point'

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-half-breeds-journey

Perhaps that's because you published it in BDSM? I put mine in Non-Human. It seems to work better though SciFi is another good place.

 

[Stella_Omega]

I sorta did it once. It got criticized because I emphasized penetration instead of bondage. Apparently, I 'missed the point'

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-half-breeds-journey

Well, yeah. tentacles are limber and strong.They can wrap around limbs and immobilize them before they begin their ... explorations ...

 

[Cruel2BKind]

Perhaps that's because you published it in BDSM? I put mine in Non-Human. It seems to work better though SciFi is another good place.

It IS in nonhuman. The story is about a young girl who is half-pixie but grows up as a human. When her mother dies the villagers drive her out and she's hungry and alone when she finds a circle-demon. The circle-demon is like an incubus and a succubus combined. It tries to trick her into coming inside its circle (it looks kind of like stonehenge) so it can fuck her to death.

She manages to make a fair trade with him, three hours in the circle in return for him telling her where to find the village and giving her some food. He fucks her in many forms, but one of them is as a lesser incubus, which in my story, looks like a slender teenage boy, but with seven thick tentacle-cocks emerging from his crotch.

And silly me, I didn't have the circle demon hold her down, I just had him fuck her.

 

[voluptuary_manque]

Snort! Readers

 

[BB47]

It IS in nonhuman. The story is about a young girl who is half-pixie but grows up as a human. When her mother dies the villagers drive her out and she's hungry and alone when she finds a circle-demon. The circle-demon is like an incubus and a succubus combined. It tries to trick her into coming inside its circle (it looks kind of like stonehenge) so it can fuck her to death.

She manages to make a fair trade with him, three hours in the circle in return for him telling her where to find the village and giving her some food. He fucks her in many forms, but one of them is as a lesser incubus, which in my story, looks like a slender teenage boy, but with seven thick tentacle-cocks emerging from his crotch.

And silly me, I didn't have the circle demon hold her down, I just had him fuck her.

It's a good story. You have an interesting way of writing.. in blocks. Concept. Concept. Segment.

You are right, I wouldn't consider it BDSM at all. It's more non-consent than anything else.. except that in NC, the subjugated doesn't always enjoy it. Your girl was on the fence. It came across like she actually liked it.
If you wanted to go all the way, you could have made the circle-demon nastier and crueler. But, you didn't.. which shows that you don't naturally think along those lines.

If I wrote it, I'd make the demon change her body to grow her breasts and turn her into a jiggling trollop of curvaceous pleasure. I'd focus on how it made her feel to experience the changes. And then I'd have him penetrate her with his overly-enlarged cocks that made her scream in pain and pleasure from their girth... yet causing her to experience blinding orgasms that racked her overdeveloped body. I also have a tendency to linger on the explicit details during the sex scene.
Same story, but with a secondary focus on the expansion and body transformation.
Also, I'd probably leave your main character returned to normal but with another side-effect.. her half-pixie side had experienced the bust growth.. and liked it. During times of arousal or excitement, she would find her breasts expanding, growing more sensitive.

 

[DavidSingularity]

Chiming in and saying hello.

Hey all -- I'm a newbie to the forum and wanted to say hello. I didn't see an introductions forum or thread, so when I enjoyed reading this one, I figured I'd introduce myself here.

I haven't written many stories, but I've got a couple of expansion stories on Lit (links below). Feedback is welcome, of course. I'm looking forward to joining the conversation here.

http://www.literotica.com/s/claire-9

http://www.literotica.com/s/coworkers-2

David