Evanslily? Caught by the Tide?

[Quesla]

Wow! What's going on with Daniel? Sounds like he's REALLY NOT very UPFRONT! with ANYBODY! What's Becky's ill mom gonna think when she finds out about this?! Love IT!!! Have been following Caught by the Tide much longer than Back to the Farm; Lots of little personal injustices going on her. Keep me hanging until the all find out! Love & LIght: Quesla

 

[Quesla]

Hi Evanslily! I finished Caught by the Tide: It took reading over the parts from Luke and Becky hiding behind the curtained off bed listening in on Daniel's cell phone conversation with "Janine?" a second and third time to figure out the foreshadowing and tip-off that Daniel had possibly even brought the hart attack on on Becky's mom and most certainly indended to be in place as a son-in law to bBecky's mom until after her passing. The lies could be very unpredictable as to which woman he was going to shaft once he made his 10% inheritance! Exactly how much Mom knew or had overheard from Becky while she was in drugged sleep, Or whether she already knew somethig was not truthfull about her prospective second son-in-law before hand and had maybe already had made changes to her will before she had the heart? I found the ending almost satisfying! Only eplogue I could imagine completing the story would be to tell what became of Daniel and his other girlfriend? Could it ever be proved that he and even Janine? might've been planning the fraud and possibly even murder of Becky's mom? GREAT!!! STUFF!!! Looking very much forward to more of your work, Particularly Back to the farm! I don't know whether I have to go through the security code thingys on your author pages to get you & Daniellekitten as my 2 choice favourites? It is surprizing with how many authors there are on Literotica; that so far your's & Daniellekittens work is the highest enough quality to make me want to show my choices in your quality work! I definietly will be influenced if I get up the courage to try to get my Stellar Zephyrian "Love's Children submitted! You REALLY ARE! AN INSPIRATION!!! Love & Light: Quesla