Editors needed please.

[Veenus]

Hi,
We have twelve new articles we have written on various subjects (M-F, Incest, F-F, etc). They do need further editing before submitting to Literotica.

Please visit our page here: http://prophoto30.tripod.com/ss/stories.html
to view these stories.

Each story has a brief description of it's category. I really need some help here. We understand our paragraphs are too long, so we are working on that, but otherwise we need some further help.

Personally, we are not too particular about little things, we would like to know if the articles are submissible, are they good enough, do you have some suggestions, etc.

This is our first attempt so are feeling a little lost.

Please email if you wish to edit some of the stories and I will get right back to you.

Thanks
Veenus

 

[CopyCarver]

Hi,
We have twelve new articles we have written on various subjects (M-F, Incest, F-F, etc). They do need further editing before submitting to Literotica.

Please visit our page here: http://prophoto30.tripod.com/ss/stories.html
to view these stories.

Each story has a brief description of it's category. I really need some help here. We understand our paragraphs are too long, so we are working on that, but otherwise we need some further help.

Personally, we are not too particular about little things, we would like to know if the articles are submissible, are they good enough, do you have some suggestions, etc.

This is our first attempt so are feeling a little lost.

Please email if you wish to edit some of the stories and I will get right back to you.

Thanks
Veenus

I'm drowning in manuscripts at the moment, but I'll do a few if other eds. don't jump in first. There must be somebody out there with a sharp pencil, right???

 

[AsylumSeeker]

I could probably read a bit and edit, but I'm wondering how legit this is given my allegiance is to Lit and this is a different web page ???

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Oops, just read again and saw the "submit to Lit" wording.

 

[Veenus]

Clarification to original thread posting

Greetings,

We wish to post our articles on Literotica and need some help editing them. We have twelve of them posted for easy perusal on a tripod website. The url is below in the original post.

We need multiple editors since we have so many to submit.

Please email us or reply here on this forum which articles you would like to edit. Most of them are still available for editing. Two are under edit. This is all marked clearly there at the url.

I am working on them all myself now to shorten the paragraphs and fix a lot of small things.

I will edit any article again for you if you tell me which one(s) you would like to work on.

Otherwise I am going thru them all in order. I should finish that by tomorrow, Tuesday.

Thanks,
Veenus

Hi,
We have twelve new articles we have written on various subjects (M-F, Incest, F-F, etc). They do need further editing before submitting to Literotica.

Please visit our page here: http://prophoto30.tripod.com/ss/stories.html
to view these stories.

Each story has a brief description of it's category. I really need some help here. We understand our paragraphs are too long, so we are working on that, but otherwise we need some further help.

Personally, we are not too particular about little things, we would like to know if the articles are submissible, are they good enough, do you have some suggestions, etc.

This is our first attempt so are feeling a little lost.

Please email if you wish to edit some of the stories and I will get right back to you.

Thanks
Veenus