King_of_Fulfolk
Literotica Guru
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I've written a lot of Porn and even posted some on another site. While I did enjoy writing it I wasn't really focusing on proper writing. A huge mistake I'm trying to correct.
To take my mind off the one handed style I have written an incest story from a female perspective in the first person. As an only child and male this has forced me to think more about content other than the sex.
I know the story is flawed but I wondered if any one would be kind enough to take a look and point out my errors, constructively of course.
Word count - 3,363
Format - Openoffice, Gedit, wordpad or notepad.
I'm in no particular rush but I would like to start working on the error of my ways quite soon.
Thank you.
Ant.
To take my mind off the one handed style I have written an incest story from a female perspective in the first person. As an only child and male this has forced me to think more about content other than the sex.
I know the story is flawed but I wondered if any one would be kind enough to take a look and point out my errors, constructively of course.
Word count - 3,363
Format - Openoffice, Gedit, wordpad or notepad.
I'm in no particular rush but I would like to start working on the error of my ways quite soon.
Thank you.
Ant.
