Editor wanted-cheating wife story

[Reshbod]

I have a cheating wife story (I know some do not like them, so I want to make it clear) and would like someone to just review it and give me an honest opinion of whether it is "submitable"or if I should just destroy my keyboard .

I would be happy to return the favor, though I would prefer similar type stories.

Thanks

 

[Chicklet]

I have a cheating wife story (I know some do not like them, so I want to make it clear) and would like someone to just review it and give me an honest opinion of whether it is "submitable"or if I should just destroy my keyboard .

I would be happy to return the favor, though I would prefer similar type stories.

Thanks

lol about destroying your keyboard - god knows i've felt like it after turning out certain peices that just make me shiver.

i'll look it over if you'd like but i'm not a real good editor - i do know what i consider hot and good writing, though, so i can at least assure you that one reader would like it = )

pm me

Chicklet

 

[flawed_ethics]

I'd be willing to give it a shot too. I'm not an editor though - I proofread my own stuff but upon sending it off and getting it back, I'll often see glaring errors staring back at me.

Also, if our writing styles differ, it could make for some odd markups.

Still, like Chicklet, I know what I like, so I can also offer some preliminary feedback in that area. It just so happens I'm going through a cheating-wife fix.

 

[Reshbod]

Ok, so I have polished up and hopefully improved my story to the point it may be submission worthy. I would like to ask if anyone out there would like to give it a quick look over and let me know if there are any glaring problems or little errors I might have missed? Again I would be happy to return the favor.

Many thanks.

 

[Reshbod]

Anyone? anyone? Bueller?.....Bueller?

And off in the distance a lone cricket chirps.

 

[Quiet_Cool]

Anyone? anyone? Bueller?.....Bueller?

And off in the distance a lone cricket chirps.

Uh...how long is it? And did the other two already read it? If it isn't too, too long, I'll give it a once-over, though it'll be my first step in the editor direction. I'm familiar with the craft (not the 'Craft, but...), I might be of help.

 

[flawed_ethics]

I can give it a second look. I wouldn't have a problem. You already have my initial impressions though - so I don't know what other feedback you'd want though.

 

[Reshbod]

Thanks Quiet_Cool It is just over 8 pages in word.

Thanks [flawed_ethics[/b] I'll IM you.

I did have a bit of an accident with it, while I was fixing it up, I hit save and then got an odd message. I went to my disk and it had vanished. I was able to pull some of it back but most of it was just question marks!!

I think I was able to redo most of it, but of course I feel it was better before. But perhaps not.

 

[TrinaT]

Like the others, I too would be willing to look it over. Just let me know.

Trina T.

 

[Reshbod]

Like the others, I too would be willing to look it over. Just let me know.

Trina T.

Thanks I'll PM you.