Editor needed.

[StevenLedoux]

Hello. I am new here, and would appreciate someone taking a look at a story I have started, about the struggles and self discovery, of a couple with medically caused ED. Part 1 is completed (6,000 words) I am concerned not only with the normal grammer and composition, (which I always need help on), but am trying something new, and would like to have it evaluated as to it's effectiveness/appropriateness.

Thanks
Steven

 

[sr71plt]

You'll stand a better chance of focusing interest if you indicate the genre of the story--and the anticipated length. Even more if you don't look for help until you've actually written it.

 

[StevenLedoux]

Thank you sr71plt! That's good advice, and exactly what a greenhorn like myself is in need of. Actually, part 1 of the story, which would, I think be in the Erotic Couplings/Loving Wives genre, is finished. It's about 6,000 words about the struggles and self discovery, of a couple with medically caused ED.

Thanks Again
Steven

 

[meathead96]

Willing to help

Hey Steven,
I can take a look at it on Monday, Labor Day if you'd like. Turn on your "pm's" and send me a "pm" (private msg) and I'll send you the email where you can attach it.
Good luck
MH

Hello. I am new here, and would appreciate someone taking a look at a story I have started, about the struggles and self discovery, of a couple with medically caused ED. Part 1 is completed (6,000 words) I am concerned not only with the normal grammer and composition, (which I always need help on), but am trying something new, and would like to have it evaluated as to it's effectiveness/appropriateness.

Thanks
Steven

 

[StevenLedoux]

Thanks Meathead96, sorry I was so slow responding, but I have been trying to drink all the beer at the lake, and failed. I hope to hear from you.

Steven