Editor Needed

[HGFarnsworth]

Hey guys this is my first post on here and I need the following help. This is my first attempt at writing a short story. I need someone to check grammar and continuity. This is a VERY rough draft of the story. The story contains underage sex so please be open minded when reading it. It's three pages long and contains 2,000 words. It's going to be a multiple part story and this is just part one. Please PM me if you are willing to help.

 

[jimhacker]

If it contains underage sex (not judging, legal age here is 16 anyway), it's not going to get through. If you want to consult with an editor on how to remove it being under-age without ruining your story, I may be able to help.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

If it contains underage sex (not judging, legal age here is 16 anyway), it's not going to get through. ...

My emphasis
If you mean the UK by "here" then you are, of course, right, but if you mean Literotica, nobody has any idea that sex even exists until their eighteenth birthday. Of course, then they may well become instant raving sex maniacs or nymphomaniacs.

 

[jimhacker]

My emphasis
If you mean the UK by "here" then you are, of course, right, but if you mean Literotica, nobody has any idea that sex even exists until their eighteenth birthday. Of course, then they may well become instant raving sex maniacs or nymphomaniacs.

yes, I did mean the UK. Reading that over, I wasn't very clear.