This story is my first foray into erotica, and I could use an editor's help with it. It's a little over 3400 words about a woman who is pulled over by a state trooper on an isolated stretch of highway late at night. She is spending too much time working late at a job that doesn't excite her, and she is surprised to find herself propositioning the trooper to get out of trouble. Ultimately, I'd love for this story to be the first in a series of increasingly intense encounters between the two of them.
I get the feeling that there is something missing from my first little story, but, to use a culinary analogy, it is easy to ruin a sauce by adding salt when it needs sugar. Does anyone have time to have a look at this for me?
Thanks, all.
JD
I get the feeling that there is something missing from my first little story, but, to use a culinary analogy, it is easy to ruin a sauce by adding salt when it needs sugar. Does anyone have time to have a look at this for me?
Thanks, all.
JD
