editor needed for sci fi/horror

[Midnight_Flux]

Hi,

I have just written a story that I would class as sci-fi/horror, though at the start the reader is encouraged to think that they are probably reading a story about a house-wife who feels frustrated with their life and dissatisfied with their husband.

The sci-fi aspect of the story becomes more prominent as the story progresses.

The horror of the story is not physical- it is more of a zen-style horror- the fragility and impermanence of identity, as well as the illusion of free will. There is a bit of gruesomeness, but not of the slasher horror school of thought

I am primarily seeking an editor who can offer some feedback regarding the clarity of the story (it is a non-linear structure) and let me know how they feel about the story in general.

 

[Midnight_Flux]

I am not too proud to bump

Please read my story someone, you don't even need to edit it, though an opinion would be appreciated. If it was possible, I would even send you a chocolate bar as a token of appreciation. However, as there is no such thing as enchanted invisible networks that allows special gifts to be delivered across the world (eyes internet connection shiftily) then I will eat a chocolate bar on your behalf instead.

It's a weird story, mostly geared for sci-fi and horror readers, I just want to make sure it is okay to read and not too self-indulgent.

 

[Darkniciad]

I'll give you a read and my knee-jerk impressions. I'll whip off a PM in a second with my email address. I'm more oriented toward the fantasy side of the category, so I can give you a perspective about how that half of the readership might perceive it.

I can handle any document format that you can read on a windows machine.