Editor needed for proofreading and formatting check on part 2 of story. MD, MF, FF, MC

[Ran_dom_Guy]

Hello,

I was rejected on my second part of a series because of formatting, so I'd like some feedback on my edited, post rejection format for submission. Here is part 1 for context. https://literotica.com/s/geocatched

This story is a mind control story with FF, MD and MF sex. It does not include incest, as that would be in part 3.

Thanks,

Ran_dom_Guy

 

[alohadave]

I'll take a look at it if you'd like.