Editor needed for Loving wives

[hulubulu]

Hi there

Im looking for an editor who likes stories in the loving wives section. I need this because i might need some feedback on the general development of the story line. So it wont just be a spell and grammar check im looking for. The editor will get some creative influence on the story, as i see it as a first draft. I cant promise to incoporate everything, but if it fits the story better I will use it.

Apart from this i might also need a grammar check, and clear up any unclear formulations and misunderstandings. My first language is not english, so its hard for me to get everything right. I will read the story several times, and fix any problems i see.

The story is about a husband wanting his wife to be with a man from another couple they know very well. It will have cuckold themes in it, but without all the nasty humiliation. Because the characters know each other that well, it will have a allot more "fun" to it. Just two couples having fun. Therefor this might best be described as a hotwife story, but with cuckold elements to it.

I also have to add that this is my first story ever, so i will welcome any help i can get.

 

[FatDaddyFetish]

I'd be happy to help with your project

I've been a writer/editor of technical materials for 25 years or so but this would be my first story here. Loving wives/cuckolding has been one of my interests over the last few years. As with any of my real-world editing jobs, feel free to use or discard whatever suits you.