Editor / 2nd set of eyes needed

Rockofmarriages

Gen Jones
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I'm working on a longish (13k words in Ch 1) story and am looking for an editor or a second set eyes.

My style is admittedly unique (see Donk https://www.literotica.com/s/donk) to get an idea.

Storyline for this one is a man and wife discover a twin of the wife during the course of business. Sisters become inseperable and don't neglect the husband. Underlying story is the business/acquisition, double crossing and large sums of money. But overall, a love story of a woman, her husband and sister.

Setting is contemporary California (Bay Area, Tahoe)

Elements of romance, incest, lesbian, anal, passionate/rough 100% consensual (I love that this word has sensual in it), group. Lots of story - the sex is part of, not the focus of the story.

If you know of a great editor, would appreciate the intro as well.
 
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