Editing

[sexnovella]

I can read any kind of story and give my judgement on the story since I have written stories in every category and have done so for several years. I can also do some minor editing and give advice. My speciality is to create short stories with females over 18 as major or main characters.

 

[sr71plt]

Once they'd reached eighteen (and thus can be put in sexual situations in a Lit. story), they would be women, not girls, wouldn't they?

 

[sexnovella]

Girls

Any group of females are called girls and their age is minimum 18 years on Literotica.

 

[sr71plt]

Webster's definition of "girl": Female child from birth to adulthood.

Lit. doesn't accept any female below adulthood in sexual situations.

"girls" as a group is sort of a giggly coffee klatch term, and use of "girl" on Literotica raises red flags.

Remember that this discussion area is about editors. Word usage matters--especially when advertising as an editor.

In that vein even your avatar suggests a problem of dancing along a very fine line.

 

[sexnovella]

Females over 18

A mature female of any age could be your girlfriend.

 

[SlightlyGone]

Webster's definition of "girl": Female child from birth to adulthood.

Lit. doesn't accept any female below adulthood in sexual situations.

"girls" as a group is sort of a giggly coffee klatch term, and use of "girl" on Literotica raises red flags.

Remember that this discussion area is about editors. Word usage matters--especially when advertising as an editor.

In that vein even your avatar suggests a problem of dancing along a very fine line.

Send him two stories SR ... one of an 18 year old and one of a 50 year old ... wonder which one gets more attention?

 

[sexnovella]

Older women.

I doubt that mature women are more popular than younger.

 

[sr71plt]

Send him two stories SR ... one of an 18 year old and one of a 50 year old ... wonder which one gets more attention?

I have a real editor for my stories.

And I think we're talk wink, wink 18-year-olds here.

 

[sr71plt]

A mature female of any age could be your girlfriend.

But not your girl. "Girl" and "girlfriend" aren't the same word. Again, this is about putting a shingle out as an editor.

 

[sexnovella]

Women

Not all women are old and everybody have been young plus you are a teenager until your 20th birthday. I guess you would say the same with the word boy since there are cowboys and boyfriends too despite their age.

 

[coochiebarber]

Hope I'm not interrupting or anything, but how would you greet a bunch of females older than 18.

Hi girls? or Hi women?

 

[sexnovella]

What about

"Hi ladies."

Hope I'm not interrupting or anything, but how would you greet a bunch of females older than 18.

Hi girls? or Hi women?