Edit me PLEASE!!!!

[Dar~]

Will someone do a quick edit on my story for me. i just finished and I am aching to submit it.!!!!!!!

 

[gauchecritic]

Will someone do a quick edit on my story for me. i just finished and I am aching to submit it.!!!!!!!

Give it me. give it me. Unless you need a quicker response (time differences) I'd be happy. Make sure you specify what sort of edit.