Dragon Ball NW

[silverwolf]

ooc for iceman

ooc: iceman i have a suggestion for a FOM (frame of mind)
First i think you may be trying to write as if it were something a friend of a friend of a friend told you.Make the charecter part of you. hmmmm. Think of your five sences Touch taste smell sight and sound.the ones that get used the most are sight touch and smell.
When you eat something you wouldnt say "he put meet in his mouth and thought it was good."
try something like "he put the thick juicy steak in his mouth, enjoying the sweet bliss his taste buds were going thru as he chewed." Think of it as your trying to interest your reader, make them want to read more, make them taste and feel exacxtly what your writing.After youve written what your going to post re read it, see if it makes sence to you and see if it flows.

if all else fail remember humans are ficle creatures. we rely on our feelings for everything.

 

[IDreamofBunnies]

Purple Heart Army in "The Path"

In PHP Remote Observation and Communication Bunker 13...

Several soldiers ran down the narrow corridor, their boots clanging against the metal grill floor. A klaxon of alarms and red lights had roused them from their routines.

Captain Scarlet was in the bunker's main control room examining the data,
"This cannot bode well, a humanoid flyer without the proper IFF transponder codes. what's the status of the target?"

One of the base operators looked up, "We have sent all information gathered from the orbital observation posts and out own station to the PHA Network. The flyer has been scanned with every frequency of light and radiation at our disposal, the alien is mostly Saijan of unusual composition. We have confirmation it was here prior to the Onion Shield's deployment!"

"Projected trajectory and possible options?"

"Satellite topography scan and psychohistory analysis say this one is heading right for the Yunzabit mountain stronghold. We are recieving possible options from PHANet...."

Captain Scarlet looked at the data and frowned, "So the target is beyond this station's ability to intercept if her powerlevel is within 10,000 of the projected number. Inform agent Ski of his new target."

"Done. And if he is not available?"

"I'm sure Zion or Troy would like to handle this..."

 

[.:iceman1987:.]

ic.i am a friend i shout
i am here to help protect this planet from marks forces the same people that destroyed my home planet my grandfather put me in a capsule after i changed to super saiyan 2 fearing that i would be brainwashed or destroyed by the forces i was 10 at that time it was a 5 week journey till i reached grand kai's planet then i was in training for 8 years under grand kai during that time i surpassed super saiyan 3.
ooc. during the plot later on i want to bring another person from my original planet and an enemy for a plot and there IS more to pendro's past

 

[Zeo]

Zeon flew over "What plannet were u origanaly from?" Zeon asked "ANd how are you able to surpass Super Saiyan 3?, i can stay at that level for a long amount of time but not even able to surpass it?" Zeon asked as he flew around this new saiayn.

 

[cats]

OOC:

Can we avoid going to Level four for a section or two? Some of us aren't evena t the second level yet. Looks at Nilons.... wait a minute she's my chara.

Any how it's kinda over killat this point. Three is understand able espiecally if it has the flaw of wearing off after a while. Level four though wears the suspense in that? Besides you need a tail to do it.

 

[Phoenix]

Ski in "Checking In"

As usually I slept with the headphone playing some kind of music that Xuxa said would help me become stronger. I was awoken by a banging on the door. Opening the door to my apartment I saw an envelope on the floor containing a disk. Putting the disk into the computer I checked out my mission. Thinking about it for a few minutes before deciding to accept.

Instead of wearing my usual red and black outfit I decide to wear something different opting for Purple Heart Army training shorts, gloves, and boots, along with a pair of dark sunglasses. Once I was ready I escorted by several armed guards to the front of the fortress where I awaited my first opponent.

 

[.:iceman1987:.]

ooc. im sorry i meant i reached ss3 not surpassed anyway back to the story
ic. the planet i was from is tesmon it is a far away planet i heard it was attacked because mark could sense the high power levels from my planet and if they left my planet we would have been a threat to his empire so he took our planet, When he overtook my planet he stripped it of all its resources and took all the children to train them to fight for him i managed to escape from an antique capsule pod but they took my sister "akira" i tried to get her to the capsule but we got hit by a kai blast and we got seperated, i saw the other pod leave but when we landed it was empty, When i learned to sense powers i could sense my sisters energy but it sensed dark or evil.
so can we travel together and train together i cant sense any power levels that are as close to me as you are friend i say as i hold out my hand

 

[cats]

Linegrie

OOC: Phenix do you want to take are time with this and do it in six or seven post each or do you want to get it over in three or four posts total.

Iceman I'm only complaing to try and make you a better writer. Your last post would be an excelent rough draft for several posts or maybe a starting Bio. In the intrest of makeing the plot exciteing it's often good to keep some things hiden. The super sayain 3 for example would be more dramtic had you just done it in the middle of a loseing battle. The evil sister would be another good plot point. Maybe he didn't know she went evil or prehaps he knew but sense he wants her to be safe dosn't say she's evil.

IC: I come up on a structure that I would imagine must also go under ground because it's not too tall. Five people come up to greet me. I land infront of them for my freindly exchange.

"I have a favor to ask." 'I'm afraid alls we can offer scum like you is death.' A fool in armor rushes me. I move my head to the side and kick the foot he was standing on when he went for the punch.

As he falls to the ground I elbow him in the back. He lands hard and bounces up as two more gaurds charge me. I quickly kick the bounceing body into one gaurd and phase out and reapear infront of the other punching him in the face plate.

A loud clang is heared and I shake my fist, suprised at the durabilty of the armor they have. He kciks me in the gut and I feel a supriseing force comeing from a weak human. I step back and let lose a ki blast that throws the man back into the wall were he falls down sparks flying.

"Those three won't be geting up soon." I glance at the two unarmored people and the one armored person I fought. I grabed my stumac. Had I been aware of that guys pwoer I wouldn't of been hurt. I guess being around these weak powers has softened me, or is it that machine he wears?

"Now what are you two going to do." One more person wearing armor and one with out. Unless the one wearing the armor is amazeingly good at hideing his power he is no threat. The other guy however could be trouble if he wants to fight.

 

[silverwolf]

soryan

ooc:hmm seems i got lost in that little thing between you 2. well i guess ill just wait for a sec. i think maybe ill just take off im comfused really so im open for suggestions.actually i think ill go meet up with ray again. much more fun.

ic: AS i watched those two talking i decided that i didnt really belong here' they havent even noticed me so' i thought as i shot into the air.Reaching out with my senses in the direction ray had went i tried to feel where she was.I found here near a mountain and sped twoard that direction. Hoping i wasnt flying into a trap.

 

[IDreamofBunnies]

Troy and Zion in "Poor Audience"

Troy and Zion were on top of the Yunzabit base looking down at the little conflict. Troy was swinging his fists in the air, enjoying the spectacle even though the guards were technically losing. Zion just shook his head in irritation.

"Oh yeah, this is intense. Just five or six years ago she could have plowed through our guys. But now each one poses a minor threat at the least. Five or six won' bother her but wait and see when she starts dealing with thousands. Shit, in another five years the entire population will be at this level minimum."

"That's all well and good but they attacked without orders."

"Ahh...give 'em a break Zion. They haven't had a decent fight since we kicked the shit out of those stupid "Icer" Changlings. Man, what a crock of shit they were."

Zion sneered at Troy and looked down again. He put his arms flat to his sides and leaned over the edge of the roof. There was a surge of power and the soldiers were on the roof with them leaving Ski and Lingere alone on the ground. It had been so fast that Lingere had only managed to start making the "N" sound of "Now what are you two going to do."

"Ski. take care of this pompous whore. We shall not interfere with your little fight. Unless of course you seem to be losing."

"That was so fricking lame Zion, way to interfere. And are you a little slow this morning? Besides she's kind of cute, for an alien."

Zion looked at Troy and frowned.

 

[silverwolf]

soryan

i arrived to see ray and someone else there . landing about 10 feet away i stood rdy, but i did not power up. i wanted to see how powerful this new guy was before i did that.

 

[cats]

Lingerie

IC: 'Ski take care of this pompus whore.' "Whore?" I could fill the anger grow in me. Maybe I won't just leave so soon after all. "Pompus I can udnerstand. Whore was just a little uncalled for."

I raise my hand at them. "I wasn't here to fight but sense you to seem to want to be rude. I'll make you suffer." Those to may be strong but I doubt they have the fighting experince I do. Infact almost no one dose, Mark profected his style over the last 100 years, and the only one he tought it to was me. That style has carried me threw many battles and I find myself here before this battle.

 

[IDreamofBunnies]

Troy and Zion in "Punk Kids?"

"I'll make you suffer."

Zion and Troy looked at Lingere, then at each other, then at each other once again. Troy burst out in a full belly laugh and Zion allowed himself to smirk.

"Oohhh snap! This chick thinks she can ice us? She is going to learn what TIME it is soon enough. Hey Z, show her the trick!"

"The trick?"

"Yeah, yeah! The one you came up with during daily nutrition intake!"

Zion held his chin thinking back to the night before then nodded, "Oh yes, that little thing. I had nearly forgotten about it, not like I was going to ever really use it."

He pointed his hand at Lingere like a pistol and closed one eye. Troy held his elbows and cocked his head back like a thug. "Oh-ho prepare for the pain!"

"Nonsense, I wouldn't think of depriving Ski. This will be a mere demonstration."

He then put his thumb down, as if it were the hammer of a revolver and a small yellow globe fired from his fingertip and flew at Lingere at unavoidable speed! She knew she was going to be hit, until it simply buzzed past her ear and continued beyond the horizon. While everyone's gaze looked at the aparantly misfired energy ball it had in fact circumvented the globe and come back around, flying past Troy and Zion, then past Ski, then right on the tip of Lingere's nose where it stopped and popped like a soap bubble.

"Can't match the speed. Zion is a player's player!"

"Don't call me that."

"Whatever...Get moving Ski!"

 

[cats]

Lingerie

IC: I simply watch his little pee shooter. He pulls the hammer back in a playful unserious manner that if I was really mad at him would probaly get him killed. Not that I don't play every once in while. Also his aim is off by a few degrees.

The bullet flys past me quickly but with no serious effects. "So that was fast but your not the one I'm mad at so you'll live." I have my eyes shut confidently for a moment before I feel the power infront again. I open my eyes and leen my head back as the bullet stops infront of my face before poping.

"Who's pompus now show off!" I'll have to make note about circulling the world with a ki blast for a suprise attack. It may come in handy. "Okay first this grunt then the ox. Then we can talk."

 

[silverwolf]

soryan

OOC: am i invisible if yall dont want me to be here let me know and ill write myself out. just wondering why no one can see me.?

 

[cats]

OOC:

OOC: Damn sliped my mind. Sorry about that. Um I have no problem with you being there. Infact it will probably be only a short time before every one is in the same spot.

Bunnies can pick one of the children to make it a two on to fight. Lingerie will object but she's crazzy like that. So next post I'll adress soryan.

 

[IDreamofBunnies]

OOC: I had no idea Silverwolf was in our particular storyline, but then I really cannot comprehend most of his posts.

 

[silverwolf]

soryan

ooc:im sry you cant understand my posts is there any way i can make them more understandable ( i am being serious btw) so plz let me know.

 

[Phoenix]

Ski in "The Psychology of a Battlel"

I watched as the guards failed miserably to even put a scratch on Ray._ Even though she seems to carry a lot of her mothers traits and both her parents huge egos,_ she still seems so different from the toddler I remembered.___ If she is indeed just like her parents then the question is posed would I fight her like I would fight Nilons and try to use her emotions and rash judgements against her or would I fight her like I would fight Zeon and try to shake down his arrogance and superiority complex.___ Maybe I could instead improvise and then revert back to form if I am not successful.

I heard the children say something but I did not really pay them no mind because I was focused on how to bring down Ray but in what way do I want to take her down and should I keep her as a captive trophy of my impending victory._ Then one of the kids showed her some kind of trick shot and I knew that this would serve to piss her off and I guess this means I am going to fight her like I would fight Nilons and use her emotional unstableness against her.

Keeping my power level at an almost bare minimum, I got into fighting stance and before she could react I sped past her smacking her in the face. The blow was to be more insulting that painful. She looked at me with hate in her eyes while I smirked a little. Outstretching my arm I signalled for her for her to just bring it hoping to futher antagonize her.

 

[cats]

Lingerie

IC: My foe moved into a fighting stance. He most likely didn't know what he was geting into. Behind me I felt a pwoer land. Soryan was here now. Prehaps he intends to fallow me? He has no ties to this planet and if I'm not mistaken he's stranded here. SO prehaps I can take him with me. He'd be a strong allie... I felt a sting in my cheek nothing painful but instead an insulting move.

I look at him once more he simply waves his hand with an ego. "I supose you have some sort of code of honor? You knew I wasn't paying attention and wanted to start the fight? I felt your power rise when you moved not by much but your punch was weaker then it should of been." I move into a fighting stance. "Fine I won't make you wait any longer." He musn't have problems hiting a girl.

"Ready to start?" I power up to about half my full power mostly to defend against incomeing atacks. I move into an offensive stance one foot ahead of the other and crouching for speed. I look into his eyes to let him know I'm going to attack.

Placeing both hands togeather I gather power in them. A ball the size of my torso forms and I prepare to shoot it off. I move my hands upward aiming towards the two that were giveing the orders. I reliese the energy ball and make my move.

I dash forward and the ball stops above my curent foe. I drop onto my back flying a few inches above the ground. My feet kick his feet out from under him as I slide into him. He fals on me and I have my hands waiting ready with one big shove I push him up into the air and he hits the ball which explodes.

I rise to my feet and take a few steps away before turning to see if he survived. If he is as powerful as I think he is he will survive easilly. Still it's always a pitty to kill a man with honor.

"Soryan, prehaps when I'm finished here you'd like to kill that brute up there." I point up to the two specatators. The one that made me mad and the one I iwsh to simply talk to. I wonder if the deal will go bad because I kill these two?

 

[silverwolf]

soryan

ic: Smiling i nod. "I would love to.Tho i dont really want to wait." I said flying up and behind the 2 of them.Powering up to but a quarter of my power i motiong with my hand sayin"im bored, any takers." i smiled as i took a fighting stance that left me a little open, just to lure them in.

 

[IDreamofBunnies]

Troy and Zion in "Ill Recieved"

Troy and Zion were somewhat annoyed with this other guy, who hadn't said or done anything before.

"They always say they're bored. I swear, I've heard that line from thirteen different alien species. Just before we handed their asses to them on a silver platter!"

"Sir, you are under the assumption that we are impressed, intimidated, or are going to be fooled into rushing in blindly to attack. This is not the case, I assure you."

Troy smirked snapped his fingers, "Honestly, I should call my little sister to deal with this guy. They're probably around even, he'll likely be more powerful but Atlantis could use the practice. That and this one would likely last long enough for her to use at least half of those ki attacks. But nah, Z do you want this one?"

Zion frowned, "He's the guest. I guess it's a matter of what he wants done to him when he loses. If he wants to be mocked endlessly then he'll pick me. If for some reason he wanted a first person view of the inside of his ass courtesy of having his head shoved up it I imagine he would pick you Troy."

Both seemed relaxed and unguarded but were ready to stomp this guy into the ground if he tried anything tricky.

 

[silverwolf]

soryan

ic: Looking from one to the other i smile."well zion if it is going to fair and honorable that suits me better than me vs. you two." still on gaurd."and since i dont mind being mocked seeing ass im wierd crazy and somewhat ugly anyway i might aswell get killed by you z. it is z isnt it?" i said taking on there tone and manner.Bowing slightly and then raising to show respect to my opponent i threw a couple few quick lefts and rights, nothing hard to block.

 

[IDreamofBunnies]

Zion in "Misunderstanding and the Concept of Speed"

Zion of course dodged these initial "play" attacks easily enough, just as he was supposed to. "Again you misunderstand, this is not about honor. You cannot possibly be more powerful than the two of us. Had we double-teamed you, your destruction would have been assured in moments and neither one of us would have garnered any useful lessons. If you prove to be more than I can handle, an unlikely proposition I might add, then Troy will of course assist me. The Purple Heart Army is not out to make friends, we are here to win."

As soon as he finished he vanished from sight for a moment, an experienced warrior like Soryan of course realized that Zion was still present, he was simply moving too fast. Despite this knowledge he couldn't track the warrior down with his eyes and his energy seemed to permeated the entire area.

Then he saw him chit-chatting with his brother Troy...then POW!!! he was in front of him, wailing away with dozens of punches and kicks, there were too many to count. The speed was incredible, he was talking to Troy at least ten feet away and attacking him at the same time, he didn't even skip a beat on his sentences when he was talking. Soryan was able to dodge many of the attacks but for every one that he dodged, five more hit home!

 

[silverwolf]

soryan

ic: Punch after punch was landing home in my gut face and any area i left open.' atleast now i know he is more psychological than physical. So i would guess troy would be the opposite of him' I thought as he hammered away. I felt a drop of blood leak down my lip.Clenching my fists i screamed, louder than anyone could hae screamed. The sound echoed off mountains atleast 30 miles away.My hair birst into flaming orange as my body was covered in energy. My muscles grew and bulged, the vains bulging from my arm.

Grabbing one pucnh and then another i squeezed his hands till i felt the knuckles grind againts eachother. Sending a kick to hit home in his gut, i sent him against the wall.Standing powered up to super sayian 2, "i am not a mere toy to be trifaled with, Your foolish games will be your downfall." i said as i cupped my hands in front of me. A ball of orange energy filled that cup almost imediatley and flew right into his chest. I knew that wouldnt finish him. I was still only testing him out. Still keeping an eye on troy i awaited either of there attacks.