dr_mabuse

[Guest]

The best unpaid public reviewer of stories. Ever!

Read Doc's cool words on the public comments area for one of my story!

 

[BohemianEcstasy]

I'd second that; he seems to be a very intelligent, rational man with a perspective that I value and an articulation of his views that is coarse and simultaneously endearing. Of course, I haven't been here that long, so what do I know?

 

[AngeloMichael]

The best unpaid public reviewer of stories. Ever!

I'll second that. His insights and constructive criticisms, whether on my stories, stories by other authors, or just on a given topic, has made coming to this site that much more of an asset in my development as a writer and that much more pleasurable because his input is always interesting.

 

[dirtylover]

I'll second it too

*rises a glass of chilled vodka to all those that are older and wiser than me, that make this site so great!

 

[pop_54]

The best unpaid public reviewer of stories. Ever!

Read Doc's cool words on the public comments area for one of my story!

Dr M is cool

 

[shereads]

The best unpaid public reviewer of stories. Ever!

Read Doc's cool words on the public comments area for one of my story!

Unpaid? Is PayPal on the blink again?

 

[minsue]

So this is where the Dr M fanclub is at! Count me in as well.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Aww jeez, guys....

It's true though. I do kind of like reviewing stories, and when things get dull or I burn out in the AH, I usually head to the story review board and see what I can do. I actually think I might be a better reviewer than I am an author. I can see what's wrong with a story, I just can't seem to fix it in my own stuff.

But I have to say that, having seen him on the boards for a while, I was really curious about Chilled Vodka's first attempt at fiction. To be honest, it's not that good a story--very uneven and lumpy-- but he tells it in such a loopy, stream-of-consciousness way that I didn't mind that there was no story there. In fact, I was kind of disappointed when the sex started, because his narration of ordinary things is more interesting than the sex.

I hesitate to say this, because talking about someone's spontaneous style can often crush it, but CV brings a very original voice to Lit, and I personally hope he keeps on taking whatever it is he's taking.

Unfortunately, his other story--the William Wallace one--kind of bit the big one. But I think he knows that.

---dr.M.

 

[cookiejar]

Heck, I posted this in the "Literotica Tattler," I might as well post it here...

His name is dr_mabeuse, one of Lit's premier writers. He has described himself as a cross between Jerry Garcia and Harpo Marx. I only know he is has a disturbing effect on me. I like a man with intelligence and humor, the good dr has both. I have what I classify as a "teenage crush for the older man" syndrome. I must admit I approach him with caution, his intellect as well as his tendencies for light BDSM intimidate ... no scare me. Keep writing dr_m, because I keep reading.

 

[shereads]

I didn't mind that there was no story there. In fact, I was kind of disappointed when the sex started

Chilled refuses to pay you for this?

 

[MathGirl]

Hur hur

I'd second that; he seems to be a very intelligent, rational man with a perspective that I value and an articulation of his views that is coarse and simultaneously endearing. Of course, I haven't been here that long, so what do I know?

Dear BE,
It's obvious that you do not know Dr M.
Setting Things Straight,
MG
Ps. "Endearing" caused part of a perfectly good Diet Pepsi to go out my nose.
Pps. I shouldn't have read this thread. The Dr says it won't be safe for me to laugh for about six years.

 

[sweetnpetite]

Re: Hur hur

There's no such thing as a perfectly good Diet Pepsi. How can you drink that stuff?

Welcome back MG!

Sweet.

Dear BE,
It's obvious that you do not know Dr M.
Setting Things Straight,
MG
Ps. "Endearing" caused part of a perfectly good Diet Pepsi to go out my nose.
Pps. I shouldn't have read this thread. The Dr says it won't be safe for me to laugh for about six years.

 

[sweetnpetite]

Dr. M is a great revewer, and a great critique-er. He's not shy about telling you both the good and the bad. When he tells you something good you can believe it. And if you really want to improve- he's the one to turn to.

He's also very welcoming to newbies. Doc's one of the first people I remember talking to on lit.



Yaaay Doc!

 

[shereads]

Re: Hur hur

Dear BE,
It's obvious that you do not know Dr M.
Setting Things Straight,
MG
Ps. "Endearing" caused part of a perfectly good Diet Pepsi to go out my nose.
Pps. I shouldn't have read this thread. The Dr says it won't be safe for me to laugh for about six years.

Yowsa! It's MG.

Hello.

 

[BohemianEcstasy]

Re: Hur hur

Dear BE,
It's obvious that you do not know Dr M.
Setting Things Straight,
MG
Ps. "Endearing" caused part of a perfectly good Diet Pepsi to go out my nose.
Pps. I shouldn't have read this thread. The Dr says it won't be safe for me to laugh for about six years.

Hehe, I'm sorry I caused you such pain in making that error, MathGirl. However can I make it up to you? *bows low in sincerest apology and subservience*

 

[shereads]

Re: Re: Hur hur

Hehe, I'm sorry I caused you such pain in making that error, MathGirl. However can I make it up to you? *bows low in sincerest apology and subservience*

Don't fall for it. MG's Dubious Dictionary soaked my keyboard and my sinuses with Diet Coke before she left the A's.

 

[English Lady]

I'm joing the Dr M fanclub too! He is a star

Wonderful writer,fair reviewer and well just down right sexy


He even took my SRP virginity............*happy sighs*

 

[shereads]

I'm joing the Dr M fanclub too! He is a star

Wonderful writer,fair reviewer and well just down right sexy


He even took my SRP virginity............*happy sighs*

I thought you took his.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

I thought you took his.

EL and I were a couple of role-playing virgins stuck in a dull detective game where all people did was run around and chase each other until she came up to my private eye's office for some questioning. Yow! I was much impressed by her...er...enthusiasm. We did it on the desk, did it in the chair, took her home and did it some more in bed. By this time the game had completely died and all that was left was me and EL going at it like a couple of stoats while everyone else looked away in embarrassment.

Then we ended up together in "Shipwrecked on Anal Goddess Island", (still the best name for a sexual role-playing game I've ever come across), and "Hot, Wet Planet".

They say that a man always wants to be a woman's first, and a woman always wants to be a man's last. But I'll always love EL for showing me how hot a SRP game could be.

God, this is starting to feel like a celebrity roast. Where's Don Rickles?

---dr.M.

 

[English Lady]

*El's all blushy and smiley now*


Shereads..yes it was a bit or a tit for tat thing we had going on *grins*


Dr M...oh yes..I remember you invited me over to the detective thread after I sent you an in awe PM*chuckles* I do remember my detective days fondly..must have been the uniform *L*

Ahhh Anal Goddess island. I loved that *chuckling* so many popporunities for pun and good old carry on type smut!

HWP was great fun until we got into trouble for taking our own inititive and my character went mad and threw herself off a cliff*L*


*grins happily* and I shall always love you Dr M for exactly the same thing *grins*

*has no idea who this Rickles guy is...but if he's got plenty of meat on him I'm up for a roast!*

 

[pop_54]

Re: Hur hur

Dear BE,
It's obvious that you do not know Dr M.
Setting Things Straight,
MG
Ps. "Endearing" caused part of a perfectly good Diet Pepsi to go out my nose.
Pps. I shouldn't have read this thread. The Dr says it won't be safe for me to laugh for about six years.

Hello squirt, welcome back, hope they didn't cut too much off Love ya kid

 

[shereads]

Dr M...oh yes..I remember you invited me over to the detective thread after I sent you an in awe PM*chuckles* I do remember my detective days fondly..must have been the uniform

Was it Matt Danger, Private Dick?



That dick is a 'ho!

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Was it Matt Danger, Private Dick?



That dick is a 'ho!

Shhh! Ixnay on the Attmay Angerday. I don't want anyone wise to the fact that you never see he and him together at the same time.

And MG, all I can say is that things haven'y been as maddeningly irriatating since you've been gone. I don't know what they've been doing to you in the hospital, but I have to think they were attempting to give you good taste implants and that they failed to take. We've all missed you madly, and I hope you're up and around soon.

What's that? Oh, you are standing up? Sorry.

---dr.M.

 

[MathGirl]

Woo woo woo

Thank you for all the welcomes, etc. I'm sort of back, but I've found there is life elsewhere. Just not as entertaining.
Good grief,
MG
Ps. Personal to Dr M: Brrrrrrrrrrttttttttttttttttttt

 

[Liar]

Re: Woo woo woo

Thank you for all the welcomes, etc. I'm sort of back, but I've found there is life elsewhere. Just not as entertaining.
Good grief,
MG
Ps. Personal to Dr M: Brrrrrrrrrrttttttttttttttttttt

That's what I get for being away trying to have a life for a few minutes. Totally missed this. Howdy, MG!

#L