Dominance

Edward waited as Angel placed herself across his lap. It had been many years since he had done this as a measure of discipline. A number of his previous girls favoured this act as a means of pleasure, and he would use it as a reward for them.

This time, it would be different. The application would be different. The intent different.

"Angel, you must never forget that I am your Master, and you shall address me as such at all time."

CRACK!

CRACK!

CRACK!

CRACK!

CRACK!

"Since this was a first offence, Angel, that is the extent of your discipline. Remember, while you are my Slave, you will address me as either Master, or Sir."

Edward scooped up Angel from his lap, and carefully laid her down on the bed, and then laid down beside her, wrapping her arm around and comforting his Slave.

"Even though I just disciplined you, Angel, I still love you." He kissed her softly, letting the gentleness of the action show her the affection he held for her. "There is much for you to learn, Angel. I shall be there to help guide you through the times that are coming. You will no doubt find them hard, frightening at times too. But please do not fear. You will never be alone on this journey."

Edward smiled, and kissed Angel one more.
 
OOC: I seem to have lost my Master and apparently my other sisters as well. May Aria join Edward too?
 
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OOC: That is because you haven't answered his last post , he is waiting on you or Lisa's response.

You are both headed back to the house to see whats up.:rose:
 
OOC: Whoops, my bad, I'd totally missed this post. Thanks yeishia...

Arriving back at the main house, Johnathon headed for the library, ordering a light lunch for himself and Aria. Taking down a novel from a shelf, he sat in the comfortable chair near the patio doors, looking out over the grounds.

"I wonder what the girls have been up to in my absence," he thought, as he waited for lunch to arrive.

Aria sat at his side but wondered if for today she should sit at his feet. "Master, is this alright?" she asked, feeling the power shift in their relationship acutely still. She knew she was going to have to be careful with him for a while.
 
Angel

Angel knew by His voice that this was discipline pure and simple, she absorbed the first slap stoically tempted to merely endure as she had always done in response to mild pain; it took extreme amounts to send her into hurtling into subspace.

After the first spank she stopped ignoring the pain; He wanted her to learn, He wanted her to trust and she needed to be what He wanted.

Her new Master was teaching her, He loved her she loved Him and so she accepted her punishment and soon hot tears we rolling down her cheeks to fall silently to the floor a testament to her growing comprehension of her new world and Master.

Finally sobbing now she felt herself being scooped up in His arms as if she was but small child, lain down on the bed and folded in his arms as he joined her there. She could still smell the evidence of their passion as she snuggled closer.

"Even though I just disciplined you, Angel, I still love you."

As if to punctuate the honesty of his words she felt his lips softly touching hers as they softly brushed away her hurt. She felt protected and special within the safety of his strong arms!

”There is much for you to learn, Angel. I shall be there to help guide you through the times that are coming. You will no doubt find them hard, frightening at times too."

Angel shivered at his words and the images they conjured up of things that would frighten her, "But please do not fear. You will never be alone on this journey."

Angel relaxed again, she would not be alone, sighing she turned her eyes to his, "Master," she whispered as his mouth descended on hers and she became lost in his embrace once more, his mouth possessing her branding her making her most assuredly His!
 
Angel knew by His voice that this was discipline pure and simple, she absorbed the first slap stoically tempted to merely endure as she had always done in response to mild pain; it took extreme amounts to send her into hurtling into subspace.

After the first spank she stopped ignoring the pain; He wanted her to learn, He wanted her to trust and she needed to be what He wanted.

Her new Master was teaching her, He loved her she loved Him and so she accepted her punishment and soon hot tears we rolling down her cheeks to fall silently to the floor a testament to her growing comprehension of her new world and Master.

Finally sobbing now she felt herself being scooped up in His arms as if she was but small child, lain down on the bed and folded in his arms as he joined her there. She could still smell the evidence of their passion as she snuggled closer.

"Even though I just disciplined you, Angel, I still love you."

As if to punctuate the honesty of his words she felt his lips softly touching hers as they softly brushed away her hurt. She felt protected and special within the safety of his strong arms!

”There is much for you to learn, Angel. I shall be there to help guide you through the times that are coming. You will no doubt find them hard, frightening at times too."

Angel shivered at his words and the images they conjured up of things that would frighten her, "But please do not fear. You will never be alone on this journey."

Angel relaxed again, she would not be alone, sighing she turned her eyes to his, "Master," she whispered as his mouth descended on hers and she became lost in his embrace once more, his mouth possessing her branding her making her most assuredly His!

Since the morning had been filled with a fair amount of excitement, most of it on the wrong kind, Edward decided that just lazying the remainder of the morning away in the arms of one of his girls would be a good way to get the day back on track a little. He had chased Angel about the grounds after she reacted badly to something he had said. She had injured herself, which was a punishable offence and a punishment combined. Then he had more pleasant time with both of his girls, teaching them both important lessons. Yes, some nice quiet time recovering was in order.

Nothing felt better than lying with a soft, warm body that carried lovely scents from hair and skin. Not to mention the delightful mix of recent sex with said warm, soft body. While his body relaxed, his mind started working on what he would do with them both in the next dew days. The following day would be their day of testing, where he would confirm their strengths, and what focuses each of them had. What directions that they wanted to take their lives when the time came for them to leave and return to the outside world.

But in someways, he hoped that they wouldn't. Both women were attractive in their own ways, and well worth keeping. But that decision was not his to make, unless they refused to obey the rules of the household. But they had shown their willingness to do just that. Both of them were reluctant to share their hearts, but both were opening up. Both had strong wills, wills that allowed them to survive some grueling trials before they joined the household. But they were learning by surrendering that will to another, they would reap greater rewards than if they fought. The more they gave, the more they received.

So with Angel, she sought love, respect and being cherished. She finally gave herself over to Edward, and she received what she had sought. Just the first touches of it, but enough for her to know the feeling. She would gain more, and stronger, as she in turn gave Edward what he desired of her. Her submission and devotion.

Celeste needed safety, security and comforting. Someone she could confide in and relax with. Unlike Angel, she was largely untrained in what was expected of her from a Master, but she tried, and was starting to succeed. It was difficult for her, but she was willing to learn. With that, Edward was willing to teach.

While lost in thought, his hand roamed Angel's body. The touch was casual, reaffirming the contact between them. He was enjoying the contours of her body with the arc of his hand's travels. Nakedness had its advantages, but the air of mystery, even hinted mystery, was a greater seductress than overt display. But then, cloth would have detracted from the enjoyment of Angel's body under his hand.

He kissed Angel's crown softly before letting himself drift in a state of semi sleep, finally giving his mind the same relaxation his body was receiving.
 
ooc:

Due to events over which I have no control it appears that I will have to leave Dominance.It id ripping my heart out as this was my first thread and I have given a lot of who I am over to it. I think M13 will be harder to replace than me and hence my leaving. I just had a few p.m.'s and will clarify I am leaving Dominance, as I have been left no choice in the matter, but am NOT leaving LIT so I shall see you all around!:)
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Please know I would NEVER do this of my own volition......EVER!!!:rose:

I have asked him to do a final post, as we had discussed earlier before the upset, in which he released Angel. She will elect much to his shock to simply leave the island as a free woman. I will post that.

M13 will be free to seek other slaves. He has already found some and so this should work out well


I will do a fast post and if you can wrap this up soon... I will appreciate it M13

Thanks


I loved writing with you all:rose:

IC:

Angel watched Edward fall asleep unsure of what to do, she resisted the urge to crawl to the foot of the bed and instead remained in the comfort of his arms.

She did not fall asleep she had much to think about.

She had heard his pretty words and so much wanted to believe them and so lay in the place between sleep and wakefulness contemplating if she could really trust them.

Hers words were absolute, infinite and heart felt ...but she knew well what a Master was capable of and He was after all a breed apart from other men!

Angel drank him in as he slept..until she too drifted off into blessed sleep....
 
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ooc: Post removed at yeishia's request.

After giving it some thought, I will not be continuing in this thread. Thank you to everyone who took part or read it.
 
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OOC: M13 we discussed how this would end and I would prefer we stick to that. I respectfully ask that you remove your ending and allow me mine.I worked hard on it and it leads Angel directly into the new chapter of her life story......Thank you :rose:


IC:

Angel awoke slowly the following morning to realize that she was alone and had in fact slept in. In a panic she sat upright to simultaneously discover two things one, her neck was bare and two there was a large mantilla envelope on the pillow where his head had rested. Her hand at her bare throat she nervously picked up the envelope. Slowly her heart racing she emptied its contents onto the bed and for a few seconds simply stared aghast!

Her slave bells and her precious necklace sat strewn amongst some documents, a smaller envelope, a gold Master card and a large sum of cash. Ignoring the documents she opened the letter and started to read;

"My dearest Angel"…….."I am going to free you, Angel. You will become a free woman, with all the rights and responsibilities associated with it.”………. You look far more beautiful with that necklace on than my collar. It is a fitting symbol of your freedom to choose your own path."…..She read it from start to finish, but the only words that truly registered were,

I am going to free you!

Free you....

He didn’t want her any more!


He had taken her heart but it wasn’t enough; the little girl who had finally sought refuge in his arms, who had tentatively given him her fragile trust, had been rejected….

Angel reread the letter several times before she sifted though the rest of the items scattered on the bed.

She had been freed she had the documents to prove it. Her ex Master, Cedric had died leaving no heirs and his estate had fallen by proxy to Edward when he acquired her, he had returned it all to angel; she was now a wealthy woman in her own right.

She was free to stay or go; should she decide to leave there was a car waiting downstairs which would take her to the airstrip, should she decide to stay she was to bring her collar to his study.

The collar? she glanced around and saw it resting like some cobra on the dresser.

Angel took a quick shower and braided her long hair, and put on the dress she had arrived in, her bound ankle was still swollen but she managed to push it into her shoes thankful they were flat. Picking up her necklace she limped to the mirror and fastened it around her slim neck, with shaking fingers it was a symbol of her freedom.

Angel tried a tentative smile, she was a born and breed slave and would be this way always, collar or not. As she stared at the image reflected she knew with absolute certainly that another would find her, and she prayed it would be soon; a slave with out a Master would be like living with out breath.

Angel had no wish to be a free woman, none at all. Master Edward could remove her collar but he couldn’t force her to be more than she was or desired to be! Angel was proud of who she was; a woman born to serve a Master; she was a pleasure slave!

She placed the documents, cash and her passport in the small purse he had provided her with, placing her golden ankle and waist bells and some cash in the envelope together with a scribbled note to Celeste; saddened that she had not been able to say goodbye in person to her new friend. Edwards’s letter she placed beside his collar on the dresser.

Favoring her good ankle she left the room stopping briefly to leave the envelope under Celeste’s pillow, “Goodbye my sister,” she whispered softly, closing the door.

Within minutes she was in the car and within the hour she was in the air. Angel had no clue, or really even where to go, her mind was numb, she vaguely remembered reading about a hotel, Oh well the driver would take her somewhere she supposed.

As the plane circled away from the island she glanced back at the place she had briefly called home. A single tear fell slowly down her cheek as she said a silent farewell to the lonely man who had stolen her heart…….



Please stay tuned for the continuing Life Story of Angel coming soon in a spin-off thread
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Angel xox
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Celeste woke up when she felt as if someone had just touched her and then left the room. She stretched and her hand hit something under the pillow. She moved the pillow and saw the envelope. She looked at it curiously and opened it. In it was cash, some jewelry and a letter. She stared at it for a moment before pulling out the letter.

To My Celeste,

I did not want to leave you under these circumstances but it is unavoidable. The master has released me and I am no longer welcome in his house. I want you to know that I love you very much and if you ever decide to leave this place that you have a home with me. I will try to contact you in some way as soon as I am set up.

I love you,
Your Angel

PS. Hide these items from him or he is sure to take them.


Celeste sat in bed and cried. She rocked herself back and for as she dealt with the fact that her sister was gone. She then realized that she needed to do what Angel had told her to.

Celeste snuck out of her room and made her way to the stable. She found Star and opened the stall. The beautiful creature rushed out and Celeste jumped on her back. She rode to Master Jonathon's side of the island and found a safe place to put Angel's items. She jumped back on Star and made her way back to His house. She put Star back in the stables and went back to her room. She went back to her bed and saw Angel's letter still there. She began to cry once more at the loss of her sister and friend.

She didn't hear the soft knock on her door........
 
IC:

The limo pulled up at the hotel and Angel was awed at what she saw; it was so very grand and lavish, typical Edward. The chauffeur pressed a reservation ship into her hand and instructed her to present it at the desk. Angel watched the car leave then glanced down at the card clutched in her shaking fingers, Master Suite reserved in the name of Angelique LeMontange, it had been so long she had forgotten that she had a second name. Angel took a deep breath and stepped across the threshold before she could turn tail and simply run, this was her very first time out alone and she was suddenly terrified; how could her treat her so? a huge tear ran down her cheek which she rapidly brushed away as she headed for the reception desk.Minutes later she was in the elevator being carried to her suite very conscious of the others staring at her dress and lack of luggage, Angel pulled herself up to her full height but kept her eyes firmly glued to the floor, thankful when she was finally alone in her lavish suite of rooms.

Angel sank onto the bed and for the very first time she cried as if her heart would break. She had failed her Master ..failed and he had simply discarded her without even a last farewell......

For 3 days angel waited in her suite, to afraid to leave, waited for him to come and fetch her back and on the forth her vision cleared, he wasn’t coming .This wasn’t a test it was a nightmare! what was she to do?

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OOC:​
I had left Dominance so that Marauder could remain and it saddens me to see that he has chosen not to.

"I hope that you change your mind the thread will not be the same with out your awesome writing M13, you have inspired me to do some of my best work in this thread!" :rose:

I want to thank all of our loyal readers for your support and hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the Dominance story. :heart:

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I sincerely hope that you decide also to follow Angel in her continuing journey.

~ "Redemption!" ~

A spin off from Dominance - Angel’s Journey forward.

"Out of Dominance came Redemption and from her Redemption came True Dominance.
This is the story of a very special kind of love born out of deep emotion! "
Yeishia
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I would like to apologize to all my loyal leaders, after suggesting that you follow Angel's journey forward the story simply stopped.

I have been seriously ill for the past several months and am now in remission.

It is only now that I am slowly returning to my writing.

I thank you all for your patience and sincerely hope that you continue to follow her adventures :rose:

~ "Redemption!" ~

A spin off from Dominance - Angel’s Journey forward.

"Out of Dominance came Redemption and from her Redemption came True Dominance.
This is the story of a very special kind of love born out of deep emotion! "
Yeishia
:rose:
 
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