It started with our camping trip with our daughter's. Carla, a bestie formed high school, and college cheerleadering. Wife and I having been divorced. We agreed on an open relationship, but limited to approved with each other. I was going to be working 900 miles away. I suggested she have some fun. A few weeks later She said, I'm sending Carla for you have fun with. I had sex before with her but she was so boring,wouldn't say anything before or have any lights and couldn't touch her (down below her navel.) I felt like I was being punished.
Do what I told you!! Please
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This doesn't seem like much of a story idea.
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That's a very workable opening for a story. It isn't a whole story. Does the main character learn to love Carla? That's a Romance story, or Mature. Does Carla get jealous and become a stalker? Is the ex-wife become furious when she finds out her ex is seeing a pretty young thing and try to ruin their lives by seducing him back? Could be Loving Wives. Does the daughter get jealous and try to seduce her dad, and it becomes an incest story, but then Carla still wants him?
Or, does the daughter get jealous and seduce Carla herself, and it becomes a love triangle?
Did the daughter send Carla to Daddy because she also finds Carla boring in bed, and just wanted to make her go away without being cruel? Then it could be Humor.
--Annie
Or, does the daughter get jealous and seduce Carla herself, and it becomes a love triangle?
Did the daughter send Carla to Daddy because she also finds Carla boring in bed, and just wanted to make her go away without being cruel? Then it could be Humor.
--Annie
