discribing oral sex

[firesflair]

ok, so I'm not used to describing oral sex, and I find I'm struggling to piece together the words, so that it's not some vague collection of sentences, or continually using slide/slid/moved. I think I'm doing well with writing female oral, but I just hit a road block when trying to transition into a scene where the woman starts giving one of her partners head.
so any advice, or stories that have really good oral sex described?

thanks in advance.

 

[Boxlicker101]

ok, so I'm not used to describing oral sex, and I find I'm struggling to piece together the words, so that it's not some vague collection of sentences, or continually using slide/slid/moved. I think I'm doing well with writing female oral, but I just hit a road block when trying to transition into a scene where the woman starts giving one of her partners head.
so any advice, or stories that have really good oral sex described?

thanks in advance.

You might read some of mine. I think I do a pretty good job of describing oral sex on a man or on a woman.

 

[Handley_Page]

You might also find some 'background' material on You Porn, particularly the "instructional" category [Link].

 

[Kurokami]

There's also a couple of how to's on writing oral in the appropriate category here on Lit. Here is my personal reccomendation, but there's plenty out there.

 

[mynameisben]

You should ask hundreds of different women to perform oral sex on you, and then ask them to describe the experience in words.

 

[damppanties]

You should ask hundreds of different women to perform oral sex on you, and then ask them to describe the experience in words.

That's exactly what the OP is doing - more subtly.

 

[TE999]

Just remember, 'blow' is only an expression. Fellatio is performed by sucking, licking and nibbling.

 

[damppanties]

Dammit.

I've been doing it wrong.

 

[TE999]

Dammit.

I've been doing it wrong.

It's the thought that counts, dampie.

 

[SandraMustard]

There's air blowin' somewhere!

If I have a mouthful of air, my lips tight on Woody's glans, and then I push my head down until his cock fills my mouth, where does the air go?

.

.

.

Why, out Woody's mouth!. Every time my head lowers, he gushes, "Whoa!"
Lowers - "Whoa!"
There must be an internal connection!

Is my husband anything like a penis pump?

 

[Handley_Page]

Dammit.

I've been doing it wrong.

Erm . . . . .
Are you sure ?

 

[HeyAll]

I like writing it as a step-by-step process. Usually, it starts with some rubbing, then kissing, then licking, then full blown oral sex. And in between I describe what the characters see (depending on who's view your writing) and what it feels like.

Oral sex is usually the easiest sex part to write for me. The actual sex is much harder. And orgasm part is my least favorite part of writing any story. It's the hardest to describe.

 

[damppanties]

Erm . . . . .
Are you sure ?

No. Maybe I need to do it some more to really be sure.

 

[emap]

I wrote a story about oral sex, got good reviews and voting so I must have done it right. Not that anyone admits to reading it but I get that with all of my stories anyway. I am so Lit's dirty little secret.

http://www.literotica.com/s/just-a-blowjob-1

That is the link for it, just as the name says, just a blowjob inside. There is as little of anything else as I could include. Well there is some simply because I needed a few extraneous sentences to get it over 750.

 

[RodenAddison]

Oral Sex: how to satisfy.

.........

 

[sun_sea_sky]

Ask your friends if they know a girl that gives great head (you can't describe it if you haven't had it) ...

Ask your wife if she knows a girl that gives great head (you can't describe it if you haven't had it) ...

I foresee problems here.

 

[sun_sea_sky]

I have it! Ask your wife if her sister gives good head. Then watch what happens.

 

[emap]

Well hell may as well ask your boss if his wife does as well.

I mean if you want to end up alone you may as well go whole hog and be broke as well.